|Reviews for you could have knocked|
| Soului chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I actually really like your characterization here. Bruce is caring and concerned and wants Tim back home, but isn't really sure what to say to make things right, Tim is angry and a little lost and has just gone through some things that are fairly traumatic, very nice.
Actually, while I was reading I was finding myself drawing a lot of parellels between how Tim is feeling now and how Dick was feeling when he first left Bruce. Funny how things come full circle like that.
I only saw one minor typo. In the part where Bruce is telling Tim how his teammates can't be trusted, I think you meant him to say 'These kids' instead of 'This kids'. Small error...got to love spell check huh?
In any case, nicely written. I really enjoyed it.
| Tara Terra chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Nice. Always wondered what Batman would think of th Teen Titans.