Reviews for Bringing Bella Home
enka3 chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
I know it's not funny, but I laughed at the last sentence...he does that every Sunday?
misty08 chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
Good story!
Alice's White Rabbit chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
Uh, oh. She's married? But, where is her husband? And, Edward should have hidden the horses better. But, I guess he figured that Emmett would be going where he was told to go.


shaz308 chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
He seems to be still punishing himself. Hope Bella can bring some peace to him.
WildRedPoppies chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
I love this little bit:

"And folks settled back, and one woman took the baby out for nursing, and one fellow left to pee and a little boy leaned into his pa and said, "When he's done cryin' we get to go, huh Pa?" And his Pa took him on his lap and gently shushed him."

Love the juxtaposition. On one hand, you have this dramatic, heartbreaking scene of a grown man on his knees, crying, so damaged and looking for redemption/relief; behind him, life goes on, the graceless practicalities of everyday life—babies need to be fed, people need to pee, folks want to get going. It's the details in the latter that make the former more poignant.

Well done.
Alice's White Rabbit chapter 4 . 8/16/2012
Though it wasn't his fault, can't believe he almost lost her in the river. But, he certainly made a heroic save.


insanemum chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
Wow - Edward is really carrying his Demons. Now he has another sin to add to his lot!
GorGirl chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
I was hoping we'd learn who Bella was married to, but I'll be patient.
KatHat4 chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
It's something else when you get me to look up stuff in your fic. Camp Douglas, a horrible prisoner of war camp for Confederate soldiers, 1862-65, has a monument for 6,000 southern men who died during that time, from freezing, starving, injuries or disease. Lord have mercy! And we think European/Asian POW camps are cruel and inhumane! Your imagery was very excruciating! OK, if it's Confederate POW camp, why were Ed and Jasper there, if their 'home' was Washington State?

...Esme did not come to church with the white folks, but went to her own service three miles out.

Edward's cry on the altar just shredded my heart. Him carrying all that pain and suffering must be unbearable. Maybe Bella can heal his heart and soul.

Thank you!
Alice's White Rabbit chapter 2 . 8/16/2012
I found this story when someone on Facebook rec'd one of your other stories. I love reading period pieces. Your turn of phrase is perfect for the time period. So far, I have enjoyed the first two chapters. I look forward to finding out more about these people and their lives.


jansails chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
Oh my, wasn't expecting that.
MK543 chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
Sensitive man carrying the burden of it all. That man does deserve him some Bella love. XOXO
lippylou chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
Poor Edward. Such a gentle & sensitive soul to have seen & experienced such horrors. I often wonder how canon Edward would have handled the horrors of WWI, not too weill I think.

Guest chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
Poor Edward!
Daisy Grace chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
Poor broken Edward. :'(
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