Reviews for The Pennyworth Games
Tiigerliily chapter 4 . 8/21/2012
Oh my God... The way you write Daz is amazing! :P Him not even judging all the contestants is something... I can see happen! :P

I truly like(d) this story, is this the last chapter or is there more to come?
Toripocalypse chapter 5 . 8/19/2012
wow dass nice undies

Anyway, yay for Leafos! Glad she won! Sandy must be KICKING HERSELF though! ;)

Dass is lazy. Can't believe he didn't bother to judge :P

Fab work!
Tiigerliily chapter 3 . 8/17/2012
Haha, have I told you yet I LOVE Bones? Both the name and the piñata itself are cute! (So is the pic of that Barkbark you have for your story image; I have a soft spot for Barkbarks!)

I like how Seedos freaked out when he saw a Syrupent cracking a seed. VERY in-character! :D You write Seedos well, I think! :D

However, looking forward to your next chapter, keep up the good work!
Toripocalypse chapter 3 . 8/17/2012
Looks like things worked out for Leafos after all! Good for her! :D

Dastardos having the urge to go downstairs and smash all the sick pinatas was positively PERFECT. Great work!
Tiigerliily chapter 2 . 8/16/2012
Nice story so far - I really like your plot ideas, they're very original! :D Glad to see this story's a little longer than your first one, too!

Wow, you really write Storkos differently than most people on here, but that's totally fine, none of the VP characters have really developed personalities (except for Leafos, Jardineiro and perhaps Seedos), so you're totally free to imagine them the way you want. It's always nice to see some variation, in my opinion! :D

Haha, Lottie bribing the judges is something I REALLY can see happen! :P I also like how Seedos prevented her from winning anyway... She must've felt pretty darn embarrassed when her piñata turned black and white on stage... she doesn't exactly treat the poor thing well, though. She's only got herself to blame! :P

Overall, this is working out nicely, good luck with the rest and keep it up! :D
Toripocalypse chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
Oh man, LOOOOOOVE how you write Seedos! :D

Man, Storkos must REALLY REALLY want that egg pouch...for a heroine of great justice to accept a bribe AND threaten her little brother like that! Glad she gave Lottie a low score anyway, though.

Dass is being silent for once, eh? Atta boy; no need to torment the competitors like you do during the P-Factor! :P

Funny how Leafos' siblings (even if they aren't aware of Dastardos' siblingtude) are all the judges! Glad to see they're not biased towards their sis, though.

Great work again, by the way Keep it up!
Toripocalypse chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
This is AWESOME so far! You developed this idea, so it's having a lot more impact and I can understand what's going on better! Much better than your last one; great work! :D

Love how you write Leafos; her enthusiasm is super cute Funny how everyone else has Syrupents. Must be the fad pinata! ;)

Hmm, Lottie's bribing the judges, huh...? You absolutely NAILED her personality, then! Perfection!

Looking forward to more