|Reviews for Sunshine|
| Abbadone chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
DONT YOU DARE SAY THERE WAS MISTAKES HERE (I don't intend to offend you, but goddamn, you brought me to tears you little-)
This is amazing. From the start to the end, I fell in love with it. I just- I can't comprehend even
| hoot hoot owls chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
TT I loved it, it's beautiful. 3
| ShiningSun3 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
I freakin cried. O god why? Anywyas really liked this although a tad sad:(
| kellbelle.epicness chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Ok, you are a great writer to get to my feels this way, but why? *sob*
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Jerk taxi driver, jeez.
| goldluka chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
goddammit! i can't stop crying :'(
| Illyria chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I love it. :D
| Meyaoi chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Well, thank you for making me sob like an idiot in front of my family. * APPLAUSE FOREVER*
| deadhemoglobin chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Ugh this is brilliant. T_T yep I usually don't read stories in first person but, holy shit, this story is so good! Plus tragedy, ooohh. ZORO was like a boss and went saving people's lives, sacrificing himself in the process. Yep totally Zoro (and of course same goes with Luffy XD). This LuZo/ZoLu pairing has a lot of tragedy- or tragedy-like-themed stories that I've read and WTF, I can practically feel dark depressing aura around me now. Plus LUFFY's last words "I stayed with you." Holy shit. I'm teary-eyed right now... Luffy and Zoro are the only ones that could make me cry like this Sheesh, brilliancy of the author, all hail thee.
I love that it's direct to the point. And almost had a poetic feel to it, which for me, made a solid impact to my emotional side. Ha
Thank youuuu for this wonderful piece of art.
| Janna chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Aaah! So depressing. T.T
I saw a few mistakes - probably just things that you missed...
Get somebody to read it over for you and fix the few things! It would be worth it! *wipes tears.
| KlawxXx chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Nnngggg... *Insert nose blowing sound here and shallow hiccups* wh... w... t... th.. this was so saaaaaaaaaaddddddd! TTTT Whyyyy? Why did you do this to me? Why did I even read this? Why am I crying? WHY DID YOU KILL ZORO!?
Gosh. This was quite the emotional roller-coaster ride... I don't really like when stories are written in "I" person/first person pov/perspective or whatever it's called in english xD (damn danish thoughts!) Yet this one was really great. Honestly! I felt so sad for Luffy; I still feel effin sad DDDDD: Yeah it's just like Zoro doing shit like that, I fucking hope that family is greateful ! Poor, poor Luffy. Sunshine, awwww. That was so cute!
I love tragedies x3 actually I hate them just as much (Nnng, and I am writing one, too - wtf?)Together in death, at least. Brilliant ending, but I saw non other come Wahhh D: but they were just about to have a splendid date TTTT damn tears, go away! AWAY! Gogogogogogo!
Not an OTP pairing, but they are cute I felt like reading a sad, heart wrenching story *masochist like that xD* and this definitely did it. Now I am going to stuck up on hankerchiefs... I ran out... Le-cough.
| xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Oh God, that was just tragic...beautiful story though. Nice work.
| SailorDeathMoon chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Omg. That was beautiful. Extremely depressing, but beautiful.
| Kingfisher Melune chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
This is far beyond beautiful. I love how you made it Luffy's POV and it soooo sad I'm still crying. You're amazing :)
PS: This goes straight to my favorites ;)
| MeikoKuran999 chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
OMG he killed himself ahhh, So romantic but sad at the same time my heart almost burst out of my chest with what happened on the phone call I couldn't believe it.
Your story was really good and enjoyed reading it.