|Reviews for A Friendly Demonstration|
| anon chapter 43 . 3/8
I love this story, there aren't many of them out there that feature an original character as a romantic partner for Harm, and even fewer that go on for more than a few chapters. So, thank you for writing this! I hope that you'll find the time to add another chapter soon, as I'm eager to read what you have planned for when Mattie and Gill meet for the first time, and what happens after that of course! Please update soon.
| Can Sheshe chapter 43 . 2/1
What a beautiful chapter and I love how you wrote Harm finally stating his love for Gill and also her love for Harm. Really enjoyed Jen and Victor's and Julia and Johnny parts as well. Thank you for this lovely story.
| ScribeAnimal chapter 43 . 1/27
Great chapter. Really enjoyed the interaction at Mess.
| DorothyOz chapter 43 . 1/24
Great chapter! I enjoyed the ball with all the characters interacting with each other and the nuisances of the event.
Gill/Harm were as sweet as ever. Good job!
| DorothyOz chapter 42 . 1/23
Another great chapter. I really enjoy Victor/Jen's relationship; they're really cute.
Oh, Gill's brother and his girl are great too. I like Abi and David! :-)
| DorothyOz chapter 41 . 1/23
Great chapter. I love the ending, had to laugh with Harm's story telling... But for all her faults, Renee was a good lady that never intended to hurt him; she was more than a little crazy but she had good intentions.
| DorothyOz chapter 40 . 1/23
OMG! Skates' niece! LOL What coincidence! But a nice one.
Nice chapter. I like seeing more of how the everyday things work in the office.
| DorothyOz chapter 39 . 1/23
I love how Gill/Harm's relationship is developing, these phone calls are nice idea. I'm glad Harm has someone to talk about all this.
I share Gill's concern about Harriet, but also Harm's about the general. I have a feeling that you're building up to something with all this and the SOFA case.
Jen/Julia's conversation was nice, and I think they're going to be really good friends these 2. Great job with that part, btw.
| DorothyOz chapter 38 . 1/23
Oh, no, poor Johnny and Julia, and his family... You did a great job writing how it's affecting his family and how it was to tell them about it. I liked that part very much.
Harm/Gill are cute, really cute. I laughed with Harm's problems with technology... I always found funny that a guy capable of controlling a piece of extremely complex technology like a fighter jet would be unable or unwilling to learn how to use a computer properly LOL
Victor/Jen are cute too. And Johnny/Julia were so sweet, it's sad to see them go through this but it was really well written. It really comes across how hard is this for both of them and how both want to reassure the other.
| DorothyOz chapter 37 . 1/23
You go, Jen! That's my girl, making it clear what she wants. I really like her and I love what you're doing with her character in this story.
I'm happy to see Jen/Victor getting together, finally. :-)
Oh, Harm and his crusades... Let's hope Cresswell doesn't hurt Harm's career for this one. I'm a little worried about it. I've already seen a few signs that you may have made him the bad guy in this story.
Gill is great! LOL Loved that one! Poor Harm didn't see it coming! He's so clueless... Great ending, absolutely perfect for this chapter.
| DorothyOz chapter 36 . 1/23
Such a nice chapter! I loved Harm's way of solving their little problem with the function.
Oh, Victor, you really should trust Jen! I'm eye-rolling at him for his stupidity and smiling because said stupidity is kind of sweet... okay, eye-rolling at myself...
Anyway, great chapter. I'm going for the next one.
| rlrct chapter 43 . 1/21
This was another entertaining chapter! From Rebecca picking out the proper couplings to Harm's catching Gill flot-footed with his "I love you" and J&J's interaction in her quarters. Well done.
| angelscatie chapter 43 . 1/18
Great chapter. Keep up the great wOrk. Update soon
| steamboat chapter 43 . 1/17
Another wonderful chapter! I really enjoy your writing and appreciate the time you take to share it with us!
| db1019 chapter 43 . 1/17
Delightful chapter . . . and equally delightful addition to this great story! Loved all the interactions at the Ball - Gill and her brother, the 'Big Band Music', and I, too, took a double-take at the introduction of Lt. Abi Cowan!
I thoroughly enjoyed Simon and Rebecca Houghton, very charming 'hosts', and loved the byplay between Harm and Rebecca while dancing - :)) VBG! Just glad to see that everyone relaxed and enjoyed themselves at what could have been a formal, stuffy affair (when the ladies had to wear uniforms instead of evening gowns) - and the party didn't break up until 4 in the morning - WOW!
Then there was the start of the Jen & Victor part - you sly devil, you - making us think they were . . a-hmmm , all hot and sweaty, and it turned out they were moving a couch into her apartment . . .! Nicely done!
There are just so many GOOD things about this story -