Reviews for New, Civilised, Savage
it-will-rise-in-perfect-light chapter 22 . 4/2/2013
Goddammit, it's 2 am and I have school tomorrow, I'm supposed to be sleeping and instead I'm crying the 5th ocean of the world. Words cannot express how much I love you or this fic right now. By the angel, you deserve an award. I feel like my heart is trying to crawl up my throat. Bless you infinitely. As much as I absolutely love Jalph, this fic with them as brothers beats every other fic there is. I just love how creative you got with the story yet stuck to the character's personalities. This going on my favorites and I will proceed onto stalking the rest of her stories. I'm going to re-read this thing till I die. Gods, bless you, okay? Keep writing and using that beautiful brain if yours. This ship needs a little proper, well-written love no matter what forms it comes in.
Ragazza chapter 16 . 11/2/2012
I can't believe Jack told Robert to kill him! It doesn't make sense because Jack said that on the island, he felt free from his problems, and then he asks to be killed. -_-.

But I love this story! The idea is very original. Keep it up.
FadedSunset chapter 22 . 10/23/2012
Hehe, now I'm gonna read this story again for the deep learning xD
ksbg chapter 21 . 10/23/2012
Oh my God, this was absolutely brilliant! I loved it, amazing endind, you literally made me cry. and oh my God, Simon LEWENDEN! I love you! hahahaha that totally made my week :').
seriously, I loved it!
FadedSunset chapter 21 . 10/21/2012
Perfect ending to a great story :)
SheWhoIsNerd chapter 21 . 10/21/2012
Fantastic ending. I mean really good. The monument thing was a great idea.
FadedSunset chapter 20 . 10/19/2012
I'm sure Ralph would like it if Jack was stuck with them :D
FadedSunset chapter 19 . 10/15/2012
The ending wasn't cheesy. It was perfect :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I love this beginning!
FadedSunset chapter 18 . 10/12/2012
Aw, Jack's actually really nice...
Terrordactyl chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Cliff hanger! I wonder what it is. A conch? A gun? Something from that dead parachuted guy? A horribly untuned misplaced tuba?
FadedSunset chapter 17 . 10/8/2012
Yay, Jack's still alive! But Piggy just died...
FadedSunset chapter 16 . 10/5/2012
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Terrordactyl chapter 15 . 10/3/2012
Ooh, interesting plot going on. Once the cave was mentioned I just knew it was a jack-in-a-box. As wonderful as Jalph is, I like what you are doing here. I like the symbolism too with Simon wearing the school jacket and Jack with his school badge on his hat.

I look forward to the next chapter!
SheWhoIsNerd chapter 10 . 9/23/2012
I was wondering where he was. Jack, I mean. And shame on you for killing simon. It's bad enough that he died in the book.
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