|Reviews for Zee Mission RZ|
| Izzi89 chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
Very well played :3 this is the first OC story i read where i liked the character as much as the Canon characters... Usually, i love writing OC stories, RA is the one fandom i try not to write OC stories for... and so, i end up strongly disliking any OC stories i find myself reading (Though i often like the OCs themselves).. but not this one :D
Great story, it was a joy to read.. It inspired an OC of my own, and i don't believe i could've thought of it without your help.. So thanks XD
| toeki chapter 3 . 11/23/2012
i love the bickering between snippy and engie here.
the explanations with the air tanks and the print on the t shirt are funny and logical.
and zombies letter is so hilariousXD
i like the winded sentences he uses (is it because he informed himself about proper writing from that business letter book?)and that he calls snippy the "sniper unit".
i felt sorry for snippy when zombie mentioned him showing signs of malnourishment.
zombie seems to be intelligent, his reasons for not joining captains army make perfect sense.
but im very curious if he really has black blood and milky eyes or if he just got that out of the other book.
is there a reason why you named him igor? i connect the name igor with the weird assistant of the frankenstein cartoons of my childhood ;)
and the finishing sentence was priceless.
im very curious about the zombie character now, and would like to read more from him. why did he dig that hole in the sidewalk?
| toeki chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
i like that zombie rescues snippy.
and the "princess peach can" was hilarious, and so in character for captain.
| toeki chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
i love your description of the breakfast scene and the different reactions to captain appearing.
id like to know why pilot knows all the methods to dispose of "old shoes" XD
and snippys and engies reaction to the hand coming out of the wall is priceless, as much as the reaction when the zombie is saying "brains" for captain.
| Priest of Pain chapter 3 . 9/26/2012
Haha, truly wonderful! Zombie seems more reasonable than Snippy and Engie combined. :D
| DomesticHeart chapter 3 . 9/3/2012
So...he's not exactly a zombie? My mind. Just blown.
Words cannot even. What is this.
It was a shirt. Not an actually ribcage.
| Tem chapter 3 . 9/3/2012
Haha, poor Snippy. The "PS" in Zombie's letter was priceless! Well done! : )
| Sol4rpleXus chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
This chapter is pure awesome, I love it.
I feel so sorry for Igor GD, is he actually carrying some strange disease or did Captain just confuse him? D:
And I hope Snippy will be alright!
Please write more soon. )
| Sol4rpleXus chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
Really great chapter! Woah, zombie guy actually saved him. :D I'm eager to find out more about this character, he seems quite interesting.
| temarcia chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
It's always nice to see some new RA story here! I really liked this one. Very amusing. : D Especially a punch line. xDD And zombie-minion was rather cute in my opinion. xDDD
Good job! I'm looking forward to reading more from you. : )
| Sol4rpleXus chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Hi! Grats on your first RA fanfic and welcome. :D
I really liked your little story and the idea of a zombie minion was quite delicious! Tgoufh I think Engie would be so freaked out he'd be close to a heart attack. xD
Good job and keep writing!
| DomesticHeart chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Yep...Snippy is always the one to have to do all the stupid tasks... and I loved the rescuing Princess Peach part!
Write more. Because it was a great lil' fic.