|Reviews for Fated|
| Guest chapter 32 . 2/9
pls update soon love this story
| Guest chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/3/2013
is idiota a masculine word? i think it's rather feminine. sorry 'bout thast! B, stop picking at her! ( that was for me :) !)
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/3/2013
Translaton souds very good. Love the sotry! especially that it has many chapters!
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/3/2013
Um, i am not spanish or anything, and i am very,very,very sorry if i get this wrong, my apoliges for being a critic but i think when jesse says "I have my beautiful mi hija" i don't think you need the mi because you have my and mi and my mean the same thing, even if in different langugaes.
| livvie chapter 2 . 4/17/2013
really love the story so far but just a heads up, jesse's sister's have cannon names. just hought id let you know. keep up the good work!
| heyitsizabel chapter 32 . 1/26/2013
my favorite lines:
"Are you sure you got enough 'stupids' in that phrase?"
"Shut up, stupid."
| heyitsizabel chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
my favorite: "ignoring the bad taste of her strange snack"
| heyitsizabel chapter 28 . 1/21/2013
:3 so sweet. well written and fantastic..
| heyitsizabel chapter 27 . 1/21/2013
| Jacqousto PD chapter 30 . 1/13/2013
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
| Jacqousto PD chapter 19 . 1/13/2013
GREAT! THis kind of drama is what I read for. Keep putting more of that into your writing!
| Jacqousto PD chapter 12 . 1/13/2013
I LOVE THE END!
| Jacqousto PD chapter 3 . 1/13/2013
In the 13th paragraph, 1st line, you wrote "I'd talked to him just the week before, and he didn't thin he'd have much more time left." I think you meant to write 'think' instead of thin, but if you didn't, then please IM me about it. I am very interested. Bye!
| luv2readgirl chapter 30 . 1/8/2013