Reviews for One Piece: Final Holy War
gerson chapter 42 . 2/20/2013
Yahoo! I wonder would the supernova pirates that are alive or not captured are going to be in story cuz law and kidd are fucken awesome and that magic guy is cool and all but yeah that would be awesome the supernovas and what other people or crew or countries are gonna fight in the last battle
gamelover41592 chapter 42 . 2/20/2013
nice work, update soon
gerson chapter 41 . 2/14/2013
Hey are you going to add garp sengoku and the whitebeard pirates or whats left of them anyway into the story?
Dragonmaster1296 chapter 41 . 2/13/2013
great chapter the fight fight with the commanders are over but i wonder if they will get to fishman island before sanbi gets there i cant wait to see. you have to find away to increase there powers in a few days because at there current level they all together do not stand a chance against a knight because there too powerful and the only way i see that happen is that they start learning to use haki and zoro and sanji gaining conqueror's haki. conqueror's haki is not about knocking people its about using your will to make u stronger so it can be used to inhanced there abilities and conqueror's haki is not just for leaders because rayliegh having it proves that. and another person u can use as a commander is shiki he could be the head commander with hes powers. u should have sanji be able to use diable jambe on both hes legs at once but give it a different name because this will give him ablitie to match zoro's asura technique
gamelover41592 chapter 41 . 2/13/2013
good chapter, I wonder how shirahoshi and everyone will react after finding out why luffy left the starw hats, also good speech from doflamingo, but i still prefer his the winner becomes justice speech
Guest chapter 21 . 2/9/2013
Lufffffyyyyy lol I kinda want him to beat up his crew XD then fight them again later :3
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
is there going to be a luffy and nami moment when they meet again or will luffy be really evil
king cool chapter 40 . 2/9/2013
is there going to be any luffy and nami moment when they meet
Guest chapter 40 . 2/9/2013
awsome hope the straw hats meet luffy
Guest chapter 40 . 2/8/2013
Dawww I can't wait for it to get back to our dark Luffy
Alexpv22 chapter 40 . 2/8/2013
As always, I am loving the concept of your story. I'm just sorely anxious for the crew to come across Luffy again.

I really want to see not only how they would react to the truth of what he had done, I also want to see if he'll become sadistic toward each member of his former crew.

PLEASE show that soon
Dragonmaster1296 chapter 40 . 2/7/2013
awesome chapter i cant wait to see what other powers doflamingo and drake will show and what other powers the strawhats have gain. the strawhats need to gain lots of before they are ready to take on the knight of d. u should have zoro and sanji start to show signs of having haoshoku haki because if they gain and master haoshoku haki they will be able to fight on the level of commanders or even the knights of d and you should have the crew start to learn how to use haki cause that will increase there powers to get ready to fight the revolutinary army have them be taught by rayleigh or garp or who ever. i would like to see marguerite or conis in the harem but i would like the story anyway if u dont put them in it and i look forward to seeing who the rest of the crew will end up with. im wondering if your going to have kaya or shakky will get involved in the war and im wondering if u will have all the commander be able to use haoshoku haki since will know most of the shichibuki /Aka: hancock, mihawk, and doflamigo/. and i look forward to seeing when law, hancock, and kidd apear in the story and u need to come with a name for the fruit drake and doflamingo ate so we can now what the full abilites of there devil fruit and u should have hawkins as a revoultionary commander
snakeboy33 chapter 40 . 2/7/2013
I like the story you have here, but I would like to maybe see more of what's going on with Luffy. Maybe you could flesh out a budding relationship with Vivi and Shirahoshi.
snakeboy33 chapter 16 . 2/7/2013
This is good, but you're falling into the same trap most people fall into. The OCs are too powerful.
nameless chapter 40 . 2/7/2013
I'm so happy you updated I thought you abandoned it but I'm happy I was wrong. Anyway awsome as always and can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm sorry if this is annoying but I had to ask about aokiji appearing. He wasn't present during the fall so I hope we see him soon.

KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK DUDE AND DON'T STOP UNTIL THE END.
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