|Reviews for One Piece: Final Holy War|
| Guest chapter 61 . 12/31/2013
How about adding a character like father Alexander Anderson from hellsing.
Or here is a thought. There was a crossover episode of toriko and one piece so here's the question, will toriko make an appearance.
And how about adding characters like orochimaru from naruto.
Or characters like greed or wrath from fullmetal alchemist brotherhood.
| Wan chapter 61 . 12/30/2013
| CiaossuWarty chapter 43 . 12/30/2013
...you know what ? I was laughing the whole time because of the three brother called 'nee-sama' hahahahah lolzzz...
Anyways I think that you should change it cause nee-sama means sister not brother... While nii-sama is brother
| CiaossuWarty chapter 14 . 12/29/2013
Amazing story ! Though my eyes hurts from watching 14 chappyz straight -.- anyways I noticed that the way you name the fruit that sabo ate was werid... dragon dragon mythological zoan fruit ?
I assume u don't know how to name zoans -.- sooo...
You should start with the category of the specific animal , in this case it is 'ryu ryu no mi' ( dragon dragon fruit ) , then write 'mythical zoan' , followed by 'model' and write the type of dragon SPECIFICALLY
EX : fire dragon , thunder dragon...and etc..
So that the name does NOT LOOK AND SOUND WERID...
oh and (once again) great story !
| gamelover41592 chapter 61 . 12/27/2013
that was awesome
| Guest chapter 60 . 12/26/2013
Please can you just focus on one piece as much as possible and update it too.
| Guest chapter 60 . 12/20/2013
When will garp show up, and can I ask a request, try to and characters who ate fruits like the zoan-zoan fruit wich gives all abilities within that category, like for example, the paramecia-paramecia fruit can grant all the paramecia abilitys and so on, and could you try to add characters like madara uchiha and sage mode kabuto you'll find them in naruto, and try to add goku and toriko from the crossover special episode
| xpirate1256 chapter 60 . 12/15/2013
plz finish this story quickly...and you are barely adding luffy in this story...let him meet his nakama in fishman island plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
| CelestarKnight chapter 60 . 12/6/2013
That was great finally to hear about Luffy's mom is extraordinarily great . Since having her be a prominent member to fishman island's history was quite the surprise. Though again you show great logic in how you planned it. Since Otohime returning to the island unscathed after talking to the Tennryubito I wondered how she got them to agree with her.
| gamelover41592 chapter 60 . 12/5/2013
| Juhabach chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Why is it you taking? Everyone it is impatient! We want to read what will be the next chapter, finally discover the truth about mother of Luffy, Cassandra. Do not keep us waiting.
| kzizl chapter 59 . 12/1/2013
guy,here my corrected list of the girls in the harem:
Shirahoshi,Vivi,Nami,Robin,Hancock,Margarete,Elecktra,Perona,Monet,Violet,Baby 5,Rebecca,Hina,Kalifa,Koala,some tenryubito girl(that survived and is a good tenryubito),the princess of Wano Country and the princess of Raftel.
in Wano Country arc you can make luffy fight with the shogun of Wano and you can make the shogun be a bad guy that works to Dragon.
The shogun can have a level of one admiral/younkou/knight of D,or maybe he can have a level of power next to the Blackbird/Sabo level.
In Dressrosa arc you can make the enemy be Scorpio and Luffy will figth against him.
You can make Scorpio be the king of Dressrosa and he be the Joker of your history,but the Smile that he make can go to the Army.
| kzizl chapter 59 . 11/30/2013
And about the two last girls that I put in my harem list,I wanted to say the princess of the Wano Country and the princess of Raftel.
| kzizl chapter 58 . 11/30/2013
thank you for the story and for see my thoughts about the shelong form of Dragon and about the harem.
| Guest chapter 59 . 11/30/2013
Some corrections about my last review:
About the appearence of the Shenlong's(dragon god) form of Dragon(Luffy's father):Imagine he how an Obelisco-The Tormentor of Yugioh with big horns in the head and with a eye similar to the rinnegan of pain of naruto,but the color of the eye will be red combined with orange.
The body's color will be red and he will have a giant size,besides have wings.
In this form he is even strong than Uranus and One will have to defeat him is this this form in a one a one figth,and with luffy's victory about his father,he will become the Pirate King.
In this form his powers(Dragon's powers) become really infinite.
And about the complete list about the girl in the harem I think that you can put like this:
Shirahoshi,Vivi,Nami,Robin,Hancock,Hina,Elecktra,Perona,Monet,Baby 5,Koala,Rebecca,Violet,the princess of Wano Country and the princess of you too can put some more princess of another lands in the harem.