Reviews for One Piece: Final Holy War
IcyAltheon chapter 68 . 9/11/2016
Sounds good! Haven't checked on this fic since early January 2014.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
Hmmmmm so you saying you give oda a run for your money ehhhhh hahaha I look forward to it
johnathan chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
focus on the final holy war only
John chapter 68 . 6/10/2016
When are you going to make the next chapter
1ce chapter 68 . 4/21/2016
It's a great idea, if only the author would continue the story...
Fuck off chapter 7 . 2/19/2016
Balckbeard working for Dragon? Fuck that
Guest chapter 68 . 12/28/2015
You can make it like you want after all it's your story and as a fan i want chapters to be out as quick as possible so the best for you is the best for me. Now what will you do about the Mera Mera No Mi ? Will you give it to one of the revolutionaries or whitebeard pirates since they were Ace's crew or some other ally for the straw hats but you must at least make his power reaper either as enemy or ally
conor.garcia.18 chapter 68 . 12/26/2015
you still around?
Monkey D. Luffy chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
Friend, do not worry. Just ignore it and manga can continue. His fans are asking for you to continue working, I also ask you to do. We look forward to the next chapter. But if you are dissatisfied, I'll give you some advice: if you want to write new history, depends on you. Or prefer to continue working, it is better to do. Here is a hint that you love:. "Luffy is training with Rayleigh He leaves Luffy train on their own and came out, but Dragon appears and says he wanted to talk to him like a conversation would change and shape the future of Luffy, but also. life. He learns the truth about D, his mother, World Government and the cycle of hatred. Luffy will ultimately change your personality and your life, swears he will bring peace to the world and destroy World Government. After the hard truth that Dragon revealed, Luffy intends to become more powerful and asks his father to train with him two years later, Rayleigh is talking to the crew of Straw Hat:. Nami, Usopp, Robin, Franky, Brook, Chooper, Zoro and Sanji.
Rayleigh tells the crew that he had not spoken or heard with Luffy because disappeared on the island for six months. I worry all of them, but Luffy appears out of nowhere and says not to worry because he has come. "I'm sure Rayleigh and the crew will be surprised and shocked by change and Luffy appearances.
Nami and Robin will be surprised by the appearance of Luffy and think, "When he was so sexy?"
If you want harem, then do it. Good luck for your work and come back soon, friend. Everyone needs you. Thank you.
ovan963 chapter 68 . 8/16/2015
Guest chapter 4 . 8/5/2015
Luffy isn't proper I mean he doesn't say father he would say dad or pops or old man I hate oc luffy but great story
Juria1990 chapter 53 . 6/13/2015
Well this is where my suspension of disbelief just shattered into a billion little pieces of 'What'. Okay now if I remember right level 3 is a hellish desert like place. No food, no water, and it is so hot you could cook an egg on a rock.

How in the name of all that is holy could one have the energy or the mental desire to rape? I would think starving, being dehydrated, and generally being so miserable that suicide would seem like a damn good option. That getting an urge to go through the trouble of forcing a girl down, or even building up the energy to do so would be impossible. Let alone having to deal with Bon Clay who is sort of inhuman in how much energy he can have.

Simply put I can't swallow that pill I'm being forced, if it was on a level with less insane conditions then yes rape would be possible. But being dried out, without food, and constantly burning up while worrying someone is going to shank you to death all the time...sorry no dice. They be too busy worrying about living than fucking. More so considering sex is not like hentai or is damn exhausting. Which I admit with O.P. logic wouldn't be so bad, but again level 3 is pretty much geared toward sapping a person's strength to the point they can barely keep themselves alive let alone do much.

As for Luffy hating the Strawhats again I can't swallow that, now hating pirates I can get since yeah there have been a LOT of asshole pirates Luffy had to deal with. But thing is you put down that some of the reasons Luffy hates pirates is what they did to some of his crewmates in the past. If he hates the crew then why would what happened to them make him upset anymore? If someone I hate is made to suffer...I get pretty meh about it and might even be all Serves the bastard right.

But beyond that Luffy's crew do not really fit into the pirate model that the evil ones do, they don't pillage, they don't even rob other ships, and generally they make places better by kicking the ass of those that are causing trouble. The only reason one can call them pirates is just their anti-corrupt government nature, and in that respect they more like revolutionaries or vigilantes than pirates. They just wear the outer coating of pirates.

All in all sorry ain't buying what you selling.
Guest chapter 68 . 5/22/2015
will u post goddamn chapter alrady
jawad chapter 20 . 4/5/2015
this is all rubbish
themaximus chapter 64 . 4/4/2015
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