Reviews for Just Over There with the Marigolds
okaygreenistheenemy chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
Though it was a sad ending, I really liked it! Good use of the plot and characters.
Arrysa chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Good story... Its a story full of... I cant really explain... The same as rin... Guilt is hunting me.. And its better to die...
The feeling of loss... It hurt alot... The feeling like a rotten shell... Over all... If i rate it its 10 over 10
Darkflower123 chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
i'm a bit confused. but it was great.
MoNoChRoMaDdIcT chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
so so SAD but so realistic too. Was Rin a ghost? this is definetly one of my top favorite stories
You're amazing as an author and I'm sure in many other things I may not know you irl but I can tell that you have soemthing about you that makes you wonderfully unique.

Rockinblckitty chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Listen to me,
And listen to me very closely,
You are a stranger to me, and I do not know who you are,
But I must say that your existence on in this world is very important to me, You are so talented and that by it self is a reason for living, For I found my happiness in living, I know your pain and I can only hope you get stronger,
This story is a work of art, I am glad you have shared your feeling with both me and the world.
I hope things get better *bows*
Rockinblckitty :3
luthor112 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
This fanfiction was really touching. Really touching.

But please, don't end you life. You are not useless. If you really want a reason, why you are not useless, well, you're an excellent writer, and that is someting. But even if You wouldn't be a good writer, You still wouldn't be useless. You are not useless, not a bit. Please, bear this in mind.

I have to tell you once again that this this is an excellent story and please, live on. You are not useless, You just have to see that this is true. And if you live on, you can meet people you'd regret not meeting.

All the best wishes to You, my friend,

- Zsolt
Coffee Detective chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I loved this story so much- -The depth was absolutely beautiful, and the plot was amazing and woven well. The characterization was on spot; I could relate so much to this story. I feel for you.
Shirai Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
*looks up with teary eyes* Koishi...? WHO THE &%$#*-& DARED SAY THOSE WORDS TO MY MATE. :(
The story was simply beautiful, koi. I still have goosebumps all over my arms.
You know, I might relate to this oneshot more than you think. I know what it feels like to be called a failure. A disgrace. A useless nobody. Suicide was a frequent thought in my head, too.
But you know, it's not worth it. It's not worth ending your life just because of what someone says or thinks about you. If your "friends" told you that, then they're probably just jealous. If any of your relatives did, however, you can just flip 'em off and tell 'em to go fuck themselves, because they have a problem with themselves, not you.
If someone hates you for no reason, then you fucking give them a good,damn reason.
BloodyPuppet chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
its so good story! great i mean
please keep writing! i love a sad story like thid...
and sorry if i write this but... you are a loser if you runaway from the "pain" of life by die-ing.
belive me i know what your feeling like when someone say that you're useless... but no you're not useless...
with the time passed you will find your surpluss if you know what i mean.
like your writing its really good you know that? and if you keep writing meaby when someone read it they found the meaning of "life" and in my religion, life come just one time and you can't repeat it so enjoy your life even it... well bad.
please keep writing
and i know its hard really hard to pass a life. and i know meaby i just can write it but can't do it...
so please dont give up your life...
Liea-lydia chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Wow this story is really be honest, this down right angst and tradegy is not entirely expected...not that I don't like the story, no, I love it. It was extraordinary, and reflectes on more abstract and meaningful things...such as life. I mean, I have read a book called 'The five people you met in heaven', and it inspires me a lot. This fanfic is as equally inspiring.
But know every single person have a meaning to live, sometimes, it may be hard to notice and you may want to give up, but believe it or not, there's still a meaning to your life. For what I see, you have a talent for writing, and that's not something anyone else have. I could see that your writting skills have improved a lot, and you did poured your emotes into this fic, and that's why it's emotional and I love it. You have a family, which is more fortunate than others who don't. I'm pretty sure that there are others who's life is even tougher than yours. And at least your friends and the readers on this site will notice you're gone. Think about it that way - No one could make your life worthless, unless yourself. The opinion of others doesn't matter, what matters is how you view yourself. Anyways, you properly heard people telling you not to give up on life now, but I kinda still ave to say it again - don't do it. You may regret it afterwards. And, believe me I tried to jump off a roof a few years ago, since I though no one loved me, not even my friends, my family, no one. But in the end, i realized dying won't solve any problem or lessen your pain. And it's they're lost and their fault when someone mistreated me, but I'm not going to show that I'm that weak and pathetic to commit suicide anymore. Yeah, I was bullied back at school, and truth be told, my life really sucks. But I'm not giving up 'cause that will just show that they have defeated me. I guess I am saying that to you cause I kind of understand your pain, though not completely, but I can feel it. I don't seriously know how to cheer up people, but then, there's no such thing as perfect person, or perfect life. I hope you won't commit sucide 'cause well I love your writting and you still got friends that cares about you. I Yeah, I think I will end my ranting here now, I feel so sorry for you, though, I really do. Bye now, and if ya wanna talk, let me know.
OrangeTsundere chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
This is an amazingly written story... and please, don't think about dying! Even if everyone calls you names, scorns you, laughs at you... You only get one chance at life. Keep writing if it lets you vent, do anything that helps you live peacefully. You should try your hardest to find something, ANYTHING, that is worth living for. Even if there's only one thing... Live for that one thing! If your family thinks you horrible... don't listen. Find that inner spark inside of you, the one that tells you that you can always have hope. The sun always rises, every day... let your heart rise with it to. Even if you are nocturnal, or enjoy the darkness, look at that bright light shining every day. That bright star, shining so radiantly... That can be everyone's heart, if they believe enough. Life is precious... so precious...
FiskitBisquits chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
This one-shot is soooo so amazing ;_; I love your writing!

And please feel better. No mattet what anyone says, you still have your friends and fans here on fanfiction! So you're not alone :) if you need someone to talk to, I'm a really good listener, so feel free to message me!

CC out
mitchkat1 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
This has to be one of the best one-shots I've ever read. It's so well-written, and shows that you put a lot of thought into it. And the story is so realistic. These are thoughts and feelings that many people go through. Please continue to write more stories just like this one. :)