|Reviews for The Traveler|
| lanigirl96003 chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
looking forward to more
| crazy-chick-4life chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
| HockeyChick10 chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Why can't I bump into a hot stranger like Bella?
| Midnight Cougar chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
I love all the coincidences ;) and I agree with him, "I think it's fate or the gods at play" too!
THEY KISSED! YAY! But, since they kissed, I think they should know each other's names soon. lol So exciting, I can't for more... And, I want to know who that little girl was... A daughter...or you said it was a true Olderward...so maybe a granddaughter from a young child of his own... *shrugs shoulders* I love the mystery! Is it Tuesday yet? :D Thank you! xoxo
| princess07890 chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Oh wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it!
| chartwilightmom chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
um, are they going to exchange names at least?
hmm, i wonder
keep it coming!
| JoJo757 chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Damn! Go Bella! Take The Traveler to your room & fuck him senseless:) Oh, the accent & thee sparks! Love it & can't wait for more!
| annaharding chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
How very coincidental that they keep bumping into each other! And now Bella is taking a bold step by inviting him to go home with her. Of course, maybe they will just play checkers and talk and get to know each other better. Hmmmm.
Thanx for the update!
| nix69 chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Was that his daughter that he was with? Is he following Bella or is it just a coincidence that they keep running into each other?
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
yeah, bumped into each other...is someone following the other on purpose? nah, not going to call you the c name...not this early in the story...
| twilightmenrhot chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Seems next chapter they will REALLY 'bump' into each other! *smirks*
| Chilly Howdy chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Thanks for the wonderful update :)
Oh my! How can a couple keep on bumping into one another is a city that size?
see you next update :)
| cocoapurl chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Great chapter! They have such lovely encounters. I think they should tell each other their real names before they get to the hotel. lol :)
| ecullensgurl chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Is their "bumping into each other" a coincidence? Bella wants what she wants and it's her Traveler and he has no problem following her lead :)
| DawnsWhimsy chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Woohoo we is going to get some lovin :)