Reviews for Fate By Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I found your story and it's amazing. Will you please consider coming back to it and completing it? I followed it just in case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! Can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() You gotta love girl time with Lanie. Update soon and have Kate dump the safe and BORING Will and go to the Hamptons to enjoy Alexis' birthday with Castle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah for Lanie being a great listener but knowing when to give Kate some needed truth. Great scene...it felt just like the show. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love ! Very good chapter ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please say you're continuing this story. It is so great. I love the relationship developing between Kate and Alexis and how much they both need it. I also really like that it is the time when Kate's dating Will and that is a barrier for her and Castle. |
![]() ![]() The sweetiest stories I've ever seen |
![]() ![]() just found your story today and read it all the way through. I'm loving it so far. I like that your younger Alexis is a little unsure of herself and that Kate can help her with that. Also, that neither Kate nor Castle are pushing for a romantic relationship just yet, though Kate going to the Hamptons for the weekend would be a problem for Will I'm sure. Will doesn't seem very invested in their relationship either but neither wants to call it off. You are doing a great job with this. looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to like this story, but it's a little hard to read, and in a couple of ways. In some ways, most chapters feel like you're reading exactly what you've already read. There seems to be little to no forward momentum. I don't like seeing Kate as weak. There's a lot with Kate that you leave left unexplained. There are very few conversations between Kate and Castle. Earlier it's 3 months she's known the Castles then it's 2 and 1/2. Oh, and there's the relationship with Will and the whole thing feels a bit like she's cheating on him and she knows it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter, but still not cool with the 2 relationships. At least your Kate seems to know it's wrong, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like this side of Rick, but not cool with Kate having two relationships. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What happened to the boyfriend? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kind of sweet, but seems to be crossing some lines in some ways. |