Reviews for The Perils of Innocence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your chapter ending was perfect to segue into a second volume! It caused me to reflect upon the ending of The Fellowship of the Ring. It is amazing what an effective Minerva McGonagle , and some excellent counseling, can bring to multiple lives. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice reintegration of canon into your story through the zoo trip! |
![]() ![]() Maybe you could put the story up for adoption? I really enjoyed what I read of it. If it dies here, well, thank you for riding and sharing it. |
![]() ![]() Rereading this again and hoping it'll be updated one day. Even if its just a summary about what was planned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi, yes. hello, i need more please. this story has its hooks in me |
![]() ![]() No, the story isn't abandoned. And then he abandoned it OMEGALUL |
![]() ![]() Wow! Just read all of this story in 24h… so good! I love your new characters and the simple way the story’s written. I do hope there will be more chapters some day, though! Thanks for this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so very much for sharing this work of art with us |
![]() ![]() ![]() what...is the point of this story? nothings happening, theres no hook. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not abandoned huh sure 4 years now do you hope this story gets continued someday got a good amount of potential still left in it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you finish it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, yes, yes! Get them out of this whole country, honestly! It’ll be better for Harry, possibly his friends too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is horrifying. And the worst part is they can’t even take Hermione out of school because she’ll get obliviated. What a nightmare. I suppose she could go to the smaller school options but they don’t sound great. |