Reviews for Sacrifice
cynthia.timmons.90 chapter 4 . 10/17/2015
Love your work! Just one thing... you do know Voltage is married with a whole lot of kids, right?
Anatas chapter 9 . 3/24/2015
Wonderful series! I love how you describe the relationship between Thor and Loki.
Grac3 chapter 9 . 9/19/2014
Ah, this was amazing! I loved the scenes with Cap and Tony, especially when Cap found out he was worthy. I really like how you write the two of them. Plus, of course, the feels were brilliant as well. When Loki was asking Thor to wake up cause they needed to go home, it reminded me of when Simba couldn't understand when Mufasa was dead. Right in the chest, like an anvil.
Hekka chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
Eh? As far as I can remember, Loki had not planned the expulsion of his brother. For me, there was obvious that he had hoped that they would be stopped before they entrance at Jotunheim (ie, no one would have suffered, the truce would not be a violation, but still Thor's intentions would prove his unavailability to be king). And of course he did not expect that Odin is so conveniently falls into odinsleep. Loki became regent completely legitimate... Although some of court might think otherwise (just because the use the gray matter is also not popular in Asgard as magic).
Sumi Anzu chapter 9 . 1/20/2014
I like ow your story is paced in good length, no tooo short/ rush and not tooo long likr some other authir tended to dragged it out to over 2o chapter when it felt like it could end on chapter 16.
FlowRah chapter 9 . 1/9/2014
Holy macaroni! Seriously, you guys will be the death of me XD (positively speaking here ;D)
I just came across your stories a few days ago and randomly read one and thought "oh well...I like that...let's read the whole series..."...and well, I can say I COULDN'T / CAN'T STOP READING! I had to take a few breaks, you know, for sleep and food, but otherwise I'm absolutely absorbed into your amazing series! (And the compliment goes to both of you, of course, since a lot or most are co-written with Gabrielle Day, right?)
I really love Loki and you've done an amazing job with the characters, the stories, the whole background history to them, their adventures when they were younger, etc.
And especially with this story, in chapters 1 & 2 I was almost screaming at my iPhone because I thought "how could you do this to Loki? Come oooooon!"...but then I was relieved XD
So I just finished with this story, but the next is already waiting, I go XD
noukinav018 chapter 9 . 11/25/2013
Utterly brilliant! I had fun reading this part of your series and I have enjoyed every single fic you posted for Thor. It has been a thrilling experience for me so far.
Do keep writing!
noukinav018 chapter 8 . 11/25/2013
It's done, Arlan won't bother them anymore. This time it is Loki who will be troubled about this. They need a vacation from the days they mostly end almost dead.
What about the rest of the Avengers? And the shadows vanish after Arlan did right? Is the logical explanation I think. Thanos again won't get what he wanted. That's a plus.
noukinav018 chapter 7 . 11/25/2013
Hahaha this is really madness, but I can't help to have a guffaw attack at the same time. Loki lied to Thor, which is not surprising. But Thor lying to Loki and getting away with it for a significant amount of time was impressive as well.
Yah, this is going to end as before and Arlan will be no more.
noukinav018 chapter 6 . 11/25/2013
Hahaha Loki dealing with Natasha sounds actually prety interesting. And what Steve did was so awesome! Good that you took that idea from the comics too :D
I don't even know where Odin is now. How about what are Loki's plans now?
Maybe what happened before when they met Arlan will happen again.
Yah, these guys never learn that they should not provoke the princes XD
noukinav018 chapter 5 . 11/25/2013
You got me there, to give another heart attack! Now the younger prince is injured and well... Good thing Thor did not make a rash decision and tried his best to get to his brother. They need a healer and fast..
What happened to Rowen? I know a lot of time has passed, but I've missed the man. Now will be a great time to have his help.
noukinav018 chapter 4 . 11/25/2013
Oh my goodness not again!
They can't have a battle when of them doesn't get an outrageous wound :(
What now?! This is insane. What is the young prince doing? I thought he was fooling Arlan with all of this insistence on having Thor to himself...
noukinav018 chapter 3 . 11/25/2013
Finally! I actually got to read all your stories in the order they're meant to. It was awesome.
And here is where I rant and scream...That is so not fair! Thor needs to do what Natasha did with Clint. A good smack on the head to have him thinking clearly again might be the answer to what they need to do now. Of all people that nutcase picks Loki to be like Clint and Eric with the Tesseract. It's such a good thing he doesn't know where the relic is. Otherwise, they would be lost.
They need to get to Loki and soon! Isn't there a way for him to fight this? He's a magic wielder for goodness sake! Odin must think of another option. If Loki is being treated as a puppet and offers Arlan advice, they're all doomed. They need to outsmart Loki while he's being controlled.
noukinav018 chapter 2 . 11/22/2013
Arlan? I have never heard of him. Perhaps I missed any other stories from you, Oh dear, I'll have to find out who he is before continuing. This is going to take a while isn't it?
Not that it won't be totally worth the wait,
So I guess Black Widow noticed the trouble.
noukinav018 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Aaaw how cute to keep seeing the bromance with their ups and downs. Oh! That's actually nice of Thor, to still trust him to be his advisor. Well, now he might talk about this to Jane. Oh.. so Sif is going to be more than angry when she sees things being serious between Jane and Thor!
Really, Loki needs to stop thinking that way. His thoughts give him credit, but he needs to refrain from hurting Thor or to always not comply with his genuine wishes.
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