Reviews for Adventure at the Amusement Park
awesome chapter 1 . 2/25
Cannot say anything elde than awesome
twiwriter98 chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
I loved it so much! You are a very talented writer so please don't let your talent go to waste! xxx
Lulu222 chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Brilliant 's quite a sweetheart :) Luv it
AliceTheSaxophonePlayer chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
This fanfic is great! It is SO sweet I love it! :)
You are wonderful writer!
Istealurfrenchfries chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
It was sweet how Emmett felt bad about hurting Bella's feelings. Then trying to make up for it. I LOVE Jerry by the way! Good job!
Murasaki on fire chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
This was great . I loved the ending and Emmett being Emmett
lime green chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
ahh so sweet
flute player1997 chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
awwww
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
This story is really great! I can't believe that this your first fanfiction. Amazing job! 3
Igoogleeverything chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
great story from start to finish, really funny well done
Cvaboda chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
I loved it;) it was very cute, I want to read more stories like this!