Reviews for JSRF: Bonds Between Rudies
Jett Fangrick chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
Hey there, great story! Maybe in the next one you could involve the gang (JSRF) finding out that Zero Beat and NT-3000 were re-constructed by Roboy, but they were still programmed to destroy the GG's, so they enlist the help of my OC Jett, a lone rudie who lives in The Fortified Residential Zone. He dresses in a blaxk t-shirt with an olive drab military colored combat jacket with pockets on the sleeves, black cargo pants, spikey black hair,blue eyes, black fingerless gloves, and goggles hanging around his neck. His skates are black with blue wheels and chains wrapped around the ankles and hanging slightly off the back. Sorry that was long, can't wait for the next part of the story!
MMDProgramVocaloid chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
This is a really nice story.

However, everything transitions too quickly.
As much as the ideas are good, the dialogue is mixed in a whole mess.

I think you should add more vivid language to your story, and it'll definitely improve.
bobby escobar chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
dear director i think your story was great it is like you are telling the story all over again in the real game you should keep up the good work and make more i know making it is very long but what you have accomplished is amazing keep up the good work and maybe, just maybe my company can sponsor you and you might be famous keep up the good work yours NOT so truth bobby escobar