Reviews for My Version Of Breaking Dawn Part 2
kirra chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
can edward read minds to
kiki2002 chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
WHY DID YOU DO THIS?! Where did Renemee come from?! You don't have any details!1
Why is this chapter so short? Why are therr ony two chapters?! I think that this could be a really good book if you do the following:
Make at least 19 chapters.(each one page long)
Go into detail.
Take Renesmee out of the picture.

If you do theese things I will recomend this book to other people.
kiki2002 chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Bella isn't that sensitive. And you mix things in. Like when it's from Bella's point of view, you make it another person's point of view. STOP DOING THAT!
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Guest chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
where's the baby
classifed chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
fix some stuff read it over
izzie chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
i love Edward i wana be bella