Reviews for My Version Of Breaking Dawn Part 2
kirra chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
can edward read minds to
kiki2002 chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
WHY DID YOU DO THIS?! Where did Renemee come from?! You don't have any details!1
Why is this chapter so short? Why are therr ony two chapters?! I think that this could be a really good book if you do the following:
Make at least 19 chapters.(each one page long)
Go into detail.
Take Renesmee out of the picture.

If you do theese things I will recomend this book to other people.
kiki2002 chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Bella isn't that sensitive. And you mix things in. Like when it's from Bella's point of view, you make it another person's point of view. STOP DOING THAT!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
where's the baby
classifed chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
fix some stuff read it over
izzie chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
i love Edward i wana be bella