|Reviews for Move Like You Want|
| TrinityLJ chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Love this and you deserve far more than 34 reviews!
| TessLouise chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Well, that was fun!
| Unintended-u chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Phew, fucking hell... :)
Any more plans with rockers E/B? Bella's so cool!
| lisamichelle17 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Sweet baby jesus. This was hotter than hell. The intimacy and lust between Edward and Bella was so strong. I loved how the supporting characters picked up on that. The motel room was the perfect setting for them. Last stop on the tour. You know how I love your writing. I look forward to more from you. Thank you, sweets.
| Courtney37 chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Ooh I really liked this. Garrett was right, the foreplay alone was hot as hell! Then they got together: BOOM! :) loved it! thanks soo much.
| garddita17 chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Wow, that was hot. The foreplay on stage leading to all that hot and heavy. So good.
| ruthiegurly chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
The stage scene just the interaction was really hot.. Wow super steamy loved it
| HeBelongstoMe chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Super hot and really fun to read. I wonder what these two are up to these days.
Thanks for sharing!
| luckyirishtart chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
In a nutshell...Loved it!
| blueeyes11354 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Wow. Well done. :)
| MagTwi78 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
So hot! I love it! More?
| MissWinkles chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I don't think I reviewed this cos I was away. YOU KNOW MY FEELS FOR THIS. Months spent flailing in WC's did NOT do the whole thing justice. Seeing it all put together just died me a little inside. These two are BURNING hot. I could feel the sweat and heat in the room with these guys. The smell of smoke and sex at the end, a perfect neat little ending, I think. I'll never be able to look at a female bass guitarist the same again.
Plus, Jasper is a dill. Really. We do love a good Jasper.
| Mari94 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Oh my, I'm game - keep going!
| IReen H chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I'm drinking. This you know.
So I'm not 100% coherent ATM.
I am also all aflusterfestified from the WORDS. Shell. The wooooords. You give them to me, my body turns them into heat, and my eyeballs flick over at hubs who is sitting on the couch not TOUCHING ME! Grrrrr.
I'm trying to think of a good way to describe the awesomeness of this story without talking about my bodyparts. Without using the word "moist" - because that is a no-no word.
I'm sorry. But I;m not backspacing. This is the review and you have to just deal with that.
I'm looking up trying to recapture my favorite lines... but they are ALL my favorite lines. Maybe this one: "We need to get out of here." The words slide from between my teeth, my jaw clenching.
So urgent. So palpable. Ung! SO HOT.
Good job, Shell. Good Fucking job. When you break the comfort zone, you really do. I love it! The premise... alone... is fantastic. The execution... brilliant!
IReenH AKA Aja
| ordinary vamp chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I flailed on the twatter over this, and now I'm doing it here. This was music perfection. I felt the music in me. And their attraction... brilliantly palpable. I'm in serious lust, Shell.
I love this.