|Reviews for Blood Will Out|
| luvyateamedward chapter 1 . 3/24
Great O/S! I do wonder if she would ever change her diet or would he change his.
| carisa.bruderer chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Really liked it!
| Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
I love it.
| Kats Flower Girls chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
As I was reading the whole time i was worried something tragic would happen to Edward, Bella or the Cullen's, kept waiting for the other shoe to drop, so it was intense... now I can finally relax my shoulders, LOL!
I really liked how Bella's joy of life is so vibrant and that was part of what Edward needs from her... That's what she will give him in exchange to giving up his beliefs, though I really do believe it will be temporarily... I think once Bella see's how the change in feeding on humans effects Edward negatively, then she will be more willing to change...
I read another story where Bella was a hybrid too, but this was much more unique, in that Edward can drink as much as he wants from her, and that she's had interactions with the Volturi...
I really liked Bella and Edwards relationship too, not just the lemon, though it was very yummy, but how they are together and that Bella will fit right in with the Cullen's when she is ready to go vegetarian... But this is all my speculation on how it will go, so that is one thing i kind like when a story gets left at a point like this... i can imagine it going however I want my HEA to be... But if you do end up continuing it, I'm sure I'd love it too :)
| GothicTemptress chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
"I didn't know what to say; she seemed very strong in her conviction, and I was equally strong in mine. But I needed her. I wanted her."
I love how he's torn about what to do. It rare that a fic deals with this issue at this level and I love that you did it, you went there!
"I had to be honest with myself and admit that she had become more important to me than my ideals."
He's a vampire so perhaps his ideals were misplaced when trying to be a vegetarian? I know, I know, it's canon and all of that, but I love what you did with his internal struggle because it reveals things much deeper and far more complex.
I really enjoyed this story!
Thanks for writing and sharing...
| Camilla10 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Vampires who continue with the traditional lifestyle, killing people, are not my cup of tea. I loved Twilight because it is a story that implies ethical choices (Carlisle and his family) and redemption (Edward, Jasper etc). So I would be interested in a follow up only if it went in this direction. A killer Bella does not interest me much.
This does not reflect on your story. It is good, but I find it disturbing.
| AshyNTitaMami chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I liked it. I'm interested in reading more. Will Bella continue to feed off of humans? Will Edward join her, or will he stick to his own diet?
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Loved it and wish you would continue. Thanks.
| sujari6 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Loved this. I hope you continue it sometime.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I really enjoyed this, and it feels like a standalone, although I and others would surely be happy to read many more chapters. But I really like the way it ends on a note of uncertainty. It feels finished.
| Aurowanfinn chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I loved this. Please turn it into a multi-chapter fic.