|Reviews for Lucius And Hermione|
| nan55 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
| Queen Serenity chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Really shouldn't have it all as one paragraph.
| anne chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
You might want to edit your story, because it's kind of hard to read. There is not nothing worse then a person who puts his work up here and whines about "No Flames!" in the summary. How old are you? If you do not want to hear that your story isn't all that good , then why bother putting your story up! Your one shot isn't bad but there is no plot. You might want to work it out properly before putting it up here.
| Nicky chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I really enjoyed that! I thought it was well-written, and it gave me a good chuckle. You did a great job with the comedic timing. However, you might want to consider throwing in some line breaks to make it a little easier to read.
| Done119 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
:D I love how you think and write about pairings I've never even thought of! Great story :D
| WildCitrusSunflower chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Ha! The ending was hilarious!
| Rosemary Lily Marie chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
It said no flames... But I still kinda wanted to.. Haha! Just kidding! :) I don't know why, but for some reason you make me like couples I usually wouldn't! I liked it, wait... No... Loved it! :)