Reviews for the things we never know
friendly warning chapter 6 . 11/30/2012
If you reread the site's rules, you'll see that author's notes as a chapter are not allowed. Your idea here is admirable, but would be better served in your profile.
Susanmartha chapter 6 . 11/30/2012
I understand. Unless you've lived with depression, You really can't understand it. Tell someone. Suicide can be planned in advance but is otfen an impulse. Just a few minutes talking to some one who can accept you and Not try to cheer you up can make a lot of difference.

Sorry, this is disjointed. Try calling National Suicide Prevention Lifeline 1-800-273-TALK (8255): - or GetHelp/Someone

Remember, this is not your fault. Depression is an ugly disease. Lack of self worth Due to bullying or other reasons can be overwhelming. Talk to someone yourself to help you deal. I' leaving this afternoon until Sat. evening, but write me any time. I've been there.
Cantanatova chapter 6 . 10/26/2012
This is a lovely story, I can't wait to read more but don't worry too much - it can wait if school gets in the way :)
JoTracy123 chapter 6 . 10/26/2012
Sorry I haven't had a chance to look over your chapter sweetie. Haven't been well and just out of hospital. Xxxxx
Laesk chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
so not fair leaving it there. i look forwards to reading more. thank you for sharing with us all
Trillianaus chapter 3 . 8/25/2012
A little better, but still missing commas etc in some places.
A bit frustrating to this reader, as this stuff was drilled into us in Primary School in the 60s.
Trillianaus chapter 2 . 8/25/2012
Coming along, although there are some grammar issues that need correcting. Same problems as chapter 1 - punctuation all over the place, irregular/incorrect usage of capital letter - unfortunately enough to pull this reader out of the story.
Trillianaus chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
The makings of a good story BUT punctuation is all over the shop.
JoTracy123 chapter 5 . 8/24/2012
loving this right back at ye update soon x
Guest chapter 4 . 8/16/2012
i look forwards to reading more thank you
JoTracy123 chapter 4 . 8/16/2012
Quick or what l
JoTracy123 chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
Good girl I can see you are improving well done. Was only missing a few full stops but other why's it is fine so looking foreword to the next update. Love ye
Laesk chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
more please thank you
JoTracy123 chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
Really liking this and you are doing a lot better nice job xxx
JoTracy123 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Really really good honey. I know that you are trying your best. Keep up the great work.

Love ye
Jo xxx