|Reviews for SasoDei One Gold Doubloon|
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/30/2016
I love it
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/22/2015
OMG! Is there a sequel!? This is a great story and I would love to see a sequel, even though they aren't really ur thing
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/20/2015
Lol, Pokemon much?
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/19/2015
Plot twist! Sasori is Sebastian! Pls tell me someone gets wat I'm saying, I said the plot twist as a joke around 2/3 of this chapter. Also does anyone watch the show I referenced, if so then ur one hell of a person
| Andy is quite dandy chapter 20 . 7/4/2015
Omg that was SO perfect! Is a sequel in the works? I really wish there is cuz it's amazing! Plus a chance to see more interaction between everyone's two favourite artists ;) And it'd be really fun and interesting to see Sasori and Deidara do Akatsuki missions with this universe's powers and as pirates. Plus the scene of Sasori's supposed death battle but with his Deidara backing him up! And the interaction between the other Akatsuki members hehe c: Anyways onto the story, as always the details fall into place as you continue to read and each layer is peeled off with each chapter. Quite impressive! There were a lot of questions that came up in the first half of the story that were answered later. Such as the scorch marks on Sasori's desk and the déjà vu he experienced when he looked at Deidara. Which reminds me why is Deidara's Akatsuki name the Golden Shot? OH is it because he was shot? Lol I just realized that but that's the only connection I can find. The first thing that popped into my mind when I read that was 'the Golden Hot Shot' which really isn't a name that will make others cower in fear, more of an insult lol. But I'm really glad this story had a happy ending for everyone, well almost everyone. I hated Sakura with all my heart but at the end of the story I was silent-screaming into my room, "YES Sakura tell him to go the other way! I love you Sakuraaaaa!" Lol. But I still don't quite get why Sakura was crying? During the middle of this fic (or around the middle) I started wondering why you were telling us the whole plot ahead of time and what the point of reading it was if you were gonna tell us. But I continued reading with the hope that the future would change, as it could be so easily done with Konan's help. And I'm so glad it did! Not only did she regain the trust and friendship she once shared with Sasori and Deidara (and the readers) but we also got to see comradeship by Kisame and Itachi lending Red their strength :D I also silently screamed when that happened, screaming 'thank you' and 'I love you Kisame/Itachi' XD. And I often silently thanked you too for not being overcome by the need to write angst and letting this be a happy ending XD. It really was a great ending though since everyone got to be happy, even Sakura came to terms with herself and did one last good deed before going to the light c: I wonder where that gold doubloon came from though? Surely it couldn't be from Deidara's hand again...lol xD. When I started reading the first chapter, it started pretty horrifying and I lost hope that this was a happy ending but I'm glad I was proved wrong lol. When I read the first few paragraphs I almost pressed the back button on my phone... Almost xD. As soon as Sasori was naming the Akatsuki members nicknames, I realized the shark was Kisame then I did some more silent screaming XD. Anyways I would love to see Deidara's mouth palms in action and Sasori's new set of never before seen powers! Great story, very fabulous characters, I even started liking Orochimaru and Kabuto by the end! Would love to see more Akatsuki involvement in the future c: Especially Hidan and Kakuzu, my second faves lool. They don't have a lot of good stories I find, would be great if they were side characters in your stories though since you're a fantastic writer! And oh yeah, what about that thing between Tobi and Sasori? Red didn't seem too happy with him... Will that be forever unaswered? Lol. Yes anyways sorry this was so long, it was a fabulous story so I thought it deserved a pretty long review! And I'm sorry for my lack of them, I built up a habit of putting everything in one huge paragraph at the last chapter, I'll review more times next story! You haven't updated for a while but I hope you're doing fine c: It's summer break where I hail from so happy holidays ;D It was a fantastic story and a great read, SasoDei forever!
| karkittyx3 chapter 20 . 3/30/2015
This was awesome!
Okay where do I start. First of all you have a really really great sense of writing stories. There is this thing in fanfictions that always bother me it is messages from the writer him/herself. You didn't include them what didn't interrupted the flow of reading what I really appreciate. My teacher always said (speaking of art) you shouldn't use words in a picture you should show it. Ok words are necessary in a fanfic but comments - in- the text are just annoying after a time. I am so grateful you didn't do it. You could include all important aspects immediately what shows you are a great writer. Thank you for that
Secondly the idea. Your idea of constructing this world is really unique and interesting you gave the characters unique powers without really making it too alternate also they stay in chara. I don't know I am so flashed I am sorry. I waited so long to read a good and long well structured fanfic and here it is.
Good job on that and you I had to cry in the last chapter. Ah shit u got me u really got me. Keep on working so good!
Sorry for the long review hahaha
Have a nice day
| Micaehla chapter 20 . 1/29/2015
This was one of your best SasoDei stories that I have ever read. It gave me such an overwhelming mix of emotions. Heck, I even cried over how good this story was. Stay creative!
-Some Random 12-year-old who read this story
| XanaduHawk chapter 20 . 11/24/2014
I feel really bad for Sakura. :'( And I'm still made at Konan!
| XanaduHawk chapter 19 . 11/24/2014
As much as a hate Konan right now, I have to say she sure as hell knows how to make an entrance.
Thank you for redeeming Orchimaru and Kabuto despite their earlier actions.
| eenayde chapter 20 . 5/13/2014
Wow! I love how how crossed Naruto and this pirate AU over. I'm just gonna comment for the entire story because reviewing takes a long time... So yeah. Anyway, I think that you did a pretty good job on this story, especially with its awesome plot twists! I also don't like Sakura much, but I couldn't help but feel a bit sorry for her. You built up the romance well, and just basically did a great job on the story. The lemons were cool too. D
| MusicKitty99 chapter 20 . 8/26/2013
I have now read all of your stories Woolfy! This was a good one :D It was sad though, but it had a happy end. Yippy Deidara and Sasori got to be together in the end.
| Dana-Eliza chapter 20 . 7/5/2013
Finally read the last chapters off this story and it was a really nice ending. Sasuke and Naruto happy together... Sakura dying was kind of sad somewhere, but also kind of unavoidable. She didn't really have anything to live for and otherwise the crew might had forced her to walk the plank... And then of course first the sadness over Deidara dying, but I didn't really think you would leave him dead, so they got a happy ending. I would maybe be interesting to see the story of the other Akatsuki members since they all have their own story probably, but I'm not guessing you're planning doing that :P
It was a great story and a good ending, leaving just that bit of mystery that keeps you thinking...
| 13LadyJiyu chapter 20 . 6/26/2013
This was breath-taking and so freakin' gripping! I cheered, I cried, I fangirled. You're a brilliant author, and your works are amazing! Can't wait to see what's next :)
| KappyKoi chapter 20 . 6/1/2013
YAY! I LOVE THIS ONE! You did awesome!
| Konan x er chapter 16 . 6/1/2013
Damn Konan did this! It's all her fault! I HATE HER NOW!