|Reviews for In Plain Sight|
| LISA chapter 8 . 8/23/2015
chapters are way too short, hard to follow the action when the chapter is s small...
| EsaWolf chapter 112 . 10/20/2013
I am so pissed off. I feel like I just wasted hours of my life reading what I thought was an amazing and well written story, until I reached the end that is. Why the fuck could you not have left it at 110. That ending was bullshit. It's like you only put it there to fuck the story up, to add another twist. It was perfect but that last chapter was shit. There is such a thing as too many plot twists.
Other than the last chapter, I loved your writing style and you are wonderful with characterization. Don't ever stop writing!
| Sebastian chapter 111 . 7/19/2013
it was a good story but the end..confused the hell out of me I though Edward was the bad guy and killer not peter you should add more to this story it's cool
| CentauRita chapter 112 . 2/28/2013
Thanks for the closure...I really appreciated it. It would have eaten me alive!
Take Care and Happy Writing...
Oh and here's a napkin for the dribble there on your chin from your drabble...I mean it was 'In Plain Sight'! Always there to help a friend out ;P
| CentauRita chapter 111 . 2/28/2013
Well all I can say is that drabble...dribbled.
| CentauRita chapter 110 . 2/28/2013
Sweet. Grand Canyon here we come?
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| CentauRita chapter 105 . 2/28/2013
It was a shock to his system.
| CentauRita chapter 104 . 2/28/2013
The mystery noise has been revealed.
| CentauRita chapter 103 . 2/28/2013
Okay...let's see just who is better at seeing in the dark, now!
| CentauRita chapter 102 . 2/28/2013
Damn it! I know, I've already said that.
| CentauRita chapter 101 . 2/28/2013
It's been totally hellish to get to this point!