|Reviews for Identity|
| krista1127yahoo chapter 22 . 2/1
Ow is charle in the cave when she took lucy back. May want to correct that.
| mariexmarie chapter 20 . 8/24/2013
Excuse me? I need help! I'm hanging on a cliff and I'm going to fall any second now...
WOAH! WOAH! WOAH! mAJOR CLIFF HANGER. Thank you for the shock...
| mariexmarie chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
i love your OC's. They are very funny. Fighting like that even when married? hahaha! your right, if I would be the author and I will write this two, I swear I'm going to be so noisy from laughing that I'm going to wakr tha whole city! nice job!
| Wacko12 chapter 26 . 8/16/2013
Whose M.C? reply
| Nintendoman58 chapter 24 . 5/26/2013
You kind of pulled a fast-one out of that with Evergreen losing her magic. Don't get me wrong, this is a GREAT fic. But one of the reasons why I liked it was that this was one of the few fics that could somehow be interpreted as a good headcanon story. I mean it fits right in between Oracion Seis and Edolas, and doesn't interfere with the main canon, until you put that little detail in.
I mean, her losing her magic is a pretty big deal. You never mention what happens to her after her temper-tantrum. Does she just, deal with it afterwards? I'm sorry, but you can't just throw that out there and just leave it without any real resolution other than: "She didn't like it but she's calm for now."
I'm pretty sure just because she lost her magic, doesn't mean she can't learn magic again.
It would be better if you put something like: "She was upset now that she had to relearn her magic from scratch." It would still give the story some element of tragedy, but it wouldn't be unresolved.
All I'm saying is, maybe in your Pledged story, you could put a scene of her training with Elfman somewhere to relearn her magic, now that she's weaker than before.
All that aside, this is still an amazing fic. It's just that one small detail that raises a lot of questions.
| LeChick chapter 15 . 4/12/2013
I'm sorry but Madilia feels very much like a fanfic character. She's ridiculously powerful, all "mysterious", and oh so good despite being forced to do evil, but of course she hides this behind a cold exterior. Honestly all that's missing is one of the guys falling in ooc love with her. You're an excellent writer and I know how easy it is to fall in love with your character so I'm not faulting you too much but keep it in mind for future stories. Pull back a little with originals.
| LeChick chapter 13 . 4/12/2013
Oh God I just love Natsu xD
| LeChick chapter 8 . 4/12/2013
Oh I always love the imprisoned psychos. Great job on Sol.
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/12/2013
Why would anyone want her eye?! Le shock! (You have me hooked, damn you)
| LeChick chapter 3 . 4/12/2013
Oh I just got why you made his dad a transformation wizard!
I feel so smart hehe
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/12/2013
This is getting awesome fast x)
| LoveIsARose chapter 26 . 3/14/2013
Sorry, but what was the promise again? (I'm too lazy to look for it myself... ._.) Also, if he is Madilia's son, then who is the father? Sorry I'm asking so many questions that I should know the answer to! :P
Can't wait for Pledged!
| Magimagus chapter 26 . 3/14/2013
Ah, the grand finale! I really, really love the ending; I especially love how you managed to convey that "relaxed future feel" (you know what I mean?), and I really love how you managed to put Madillia's son in the story... And I can't wait to find out how he and August met, now! I really love their names, by the way.
I also like that you decided to make it half-way - assuming that by chapter nine you didn't mean it was the last chapter in the story - and I think it was a good idea to end the story without it being a Na/Lu -centric chapter. Then there's Levy being the one to find them, too... and how August is mute, and how it started off with her getting in trouble with the man when she hadn't done anything. But, how does (or more like, why I guess...) does Crow know sign language? I guess we'll find it out at some point, or something, haha.
But I really loved it. I really like how it was sort of in Levy's POV (or at least the beginning)... And how you explained Makarov's day before he finally got to the guild, haha.
It was a really amazing chapter, and now I really can't wait to read Pledged... This story is (I won't say was! 'Cos it shall remain it) amazing! c:
I'll be eagerly awaiting Pledged! :)
| Captain Ea Rayos chapter 26 . 3/13/2013
O.O i knew from the start it was that lady's kid! continue! and it's amazing a girl that speaks sign language! i'm learning it and it's pretty fun! Post the second part story soon"! thanks for writting an awesome story!
| Naitosutoka Eien No Honoo chapter 26 . 3/13/2013
alright that was interesting