|Reviews for Back and Forth|
| Awesome chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
If this is what you write when you go crazy, get crazy. This is hilarious. I know its different then most AAML and overly exaggerated, but after reading page after page of mindless fluff this brightened my day, and I can safely say that Ash and Misty are in character here more than almost any other story on this site.
| Somebody chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
0_o Weirdest FanFic I've Read... I Like It!
| Skywa1ker chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
| Brianna Summers chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Oh my god, I'm laughing so hard! Exaggeration my foot, you hit the nail on the head...
Okay, maybe it was a little exaggerated. But it was still hilarious.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Next chapter or chapter 3 have ash sleep with all 3
| Aprotny chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
This story is funny. Write more like it.
| Angel-of-Energy chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
You should write another part in which May and Dawn realize that Misty has Ash all to herself while they're fighting. . this was hilarious. I liked it :D
| whatdotheydream chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
why would we kill you? geez. I was laughing so hard. Poor Ashy. Heheh.
| JL01 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Liked this one thoroughly, haha. It reminded me so much of a YouTube video which I thoroughly enjoyed, where Megyn Kelly was having a catfight with Kirsten Powers on Fox News XD . Really refreshing to read something like this out of all the other Pokeshipping fics that are popping up right now that are far too K oriented for my liking.
Really hoping that you add a few more chapters to this one. :D
| Yoshi's kun chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
I know what you were doing, you were trying to write a parody, but you didn't think you were trying to write a parody. That was why parts of this felt off and trailed closely into bashing territory as opposed to it having a consistent humorous feel. What this fic actually parodies is all of harem fics on this site that involve all of the girls going after Ash. I hate those fics.
If you toned a few things down ever so slightly like, "she had always known Dawn was an airheaded b-word" to something like, "she had always thought Dawn was a bit of an overoptimistic spazz" so it would be more in line with her dialog about May, then you would contrasting their real characters with their portrayals in fanfiction. Because we know they aren't like this, May couldn't even get mad at Brianna when she was throwing herself at Drew after all, so doing it for Ash shows the OOC contrast.
So yeah, you really should relabel this as Parody/Humor because that's kind of what this is, and people will know you aren't really bashing them. Tweaking some of the dialog would be great too, just make it a full on parody. Do it for lulz.
Eh, just saying. Besides Misty has been portrayed like this too, many many times in many many fics. I repeat, harem and most triangle fics suck horribly.
| TomboybuttercupSakaast chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
you should make it a two or three shot
| Empress Empoleon chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
This was so cute! I absolutely loved it! And, while I don't hate May or Dawn either, it was hilarious to see them arguing like that. xD On my favorites list, good job!
| Ashley chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Truthfully, even thought this is a one-shot, you should make another chapter. I actually kinda like this story for some reason. Anyway, keep up the good work!
| Polos chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
haha that was great. poor ashy-boy.
That was great I needed that laugh
| XxX chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
How do you love someone for 5 years if you've only know them 2?
Other than that pretty good...