|Reviews for Tis better to have loved and Lost?|
| Ms.annemay chapter 2 . 8/17/2015
(claps hands while putting noose down) Finally! Tama x mois! I ship this couple, somehow even more than kerotama! Looks like I have another reason not to practice suicide on teddy rupix.
| TopazStrange chapter 4 . 9/25/2013
Giroro vs. Knuckles?! EPIC! Keep up both the story and the randomness )
| sgt.karenbear chapter 4 . 9/24/2013
LMAO hahaha that was so perfect! For a moment I felt like as if I was watching an episode! LOVED. The fanfiction! Please update soon :DDD
| kennedy chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
I LUV THE TWIST AT THE END! i LUVVVVV tamama!
| sgt.karenbear chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
Hahahahah I love the little side stories for each character! SUPER CUTE! Please update soon!
| Erinunu chapter 2 . 10/2/2012
er, the space-scooter-things they're called saucers. Flying. Saucers. and im officially creep/weirded-out by tamama now...awesome.
| Scissors-is-a-Nerd chapter 2 . 9/30/2012
Hmmmm... methinks Angol Mois already has depression.
Monophobia, codependency, MPD, and a bunch of other stuff as well.
No, I don't deliberately try and find stuff out about Angol Mois' messed up personality in my spare time. That's Rainbowkittyblossomwings you're thinking about.
But anyway, there is a kind of deep depression a person can develop that's so severe and they try to conceal it by telling themselves that they're happy when they're really not. They act unnaturally cheerful and make false realities for themselves.
Wow. I'm such a killjoy. I'm so sorry.
Anywho, although that doesn't particularly matter at the moment, I love your punchline! "I want to spend time with uncle Tamama instead!" Uh-oh. Tamama won't be very happy. -.-'
Great job! Keep up the good work!
| Scissors-is-a-Nerd chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
No, the Japanese company didn't do that at all. The dub added it in English, which is one of the things I dislike about the dub - it strays way too much from the original version.
Anyway, great job so far! The only things I would suggest would be to possibly cut down on the author/character interactions (basically putting yourself in the story) because as Mine Yoshizaki says, an author should never let his true feelings slip! Instead, if you want to emphasize that it is the narrator talking, how about you write it in bold? Personally, I think that would make it a little easier to tell apart, and most people do it that way too. Dunno if you want to go along with that format, though.
Also, see if you can make a new paragraph each time a new person speaks. When it's all clumped together, it makes it a little difficult to read.
| 23CR3T chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
U will continue!-de chi!
| OneHellOfAKitsune chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
... Not to be rude, but are you new to this site? Anima is a manga. This is a Sgt. Frog fic.
| Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Well I have a few things to say.
Thing number one: Interesting. It reminds me a little of Excel Saga with the randomness as it seems. Not bad if you are into that and actually pretty amusing.
Thing number two: I suggest working on your formating. Part of the story is one big paragraph with lots of people thinking and speaking so it's gets really confusing. I strongly recommend adopting a novel-like approach to dialogue. Basically, start a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. It makes it easier to keep track of who is speaking and it makes the story look more professional so more people will take it serious.
Thing number Four: Anima (Assume it reads Plus Anima. FF always removes the plus for some reason.) Anima is a manga about three kids and one teen who are outcasts due to their animal powers. (Sorta like X-men but not as violent.) The Anima section is for fanfiction about the manga Anima not for Misc. Anime or Crossovers.
Judging from your story, I'm guessing you want the Sgt. Frog/ケロロ軍曹 section? It's located farther down on the list of possible animes. When you are picking the section you want, I strongly recommend searching for the section by looking for the first letter of the title or (in the cases where the dub name is different than the sub) do some research to look for the Japanese title just in case. Also, sometimes FF will not have the section you want just yet. You can post your story under Misc Anime/Manga (if the story is based off an anime/manga) located in the Misc. section. Then you can contact FF and they can make a few section for the anime.
So as you can see your story needs moving to the proper section or site. If you don't move your story, it can be reported and then deleted from the site which could lead to your whole account being deleted which would suck. Also, as a warning, if I find you misplacing another story into the Anima section or any other section that I read, I will be forced to report all your stories. So please move your story to the proper section. If you don't know where it should go, please contact me and I will be more than willing to help.
Best of Luck writing! And if you have any questions about anything fanfiction, give me a shout. I'd be glad to help.
P.S Below are instructions to help you move your story to the proper section on Fanfiction if you don't know how. If you need to delete, contact me and I can send you information.
Go to your sign in screen which shows all your account setting and such (you do this just by clicking on the Sign In link in the upper right corner of the screen.)
Once there you want to click on the publish tab which will open into a small menu. From that menu you will want to click on "Manage Stories." A new page will load.
Then you want to click on the title of your story and a new page will load. On that page will be all your story information.
Now all you have to do is look for where it says "Category". Directly across from it is a button that says "Change Category." You'll want to click it and a new window will appear. It will have a small menu on it. You'll want to scroll down the menu until you reach the option that has the title you based your story off of. You will then click it and save your story properties and there. Your story is moved and you can no longer be reported. (Unless you put it into another wrong section. Then all bets are off.)
Best of luck!