|Reviews for Rumors and Gifts|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
I have a prompt for you; originally for FMA but works for Inucest/other:
"Ed and Al are Lolitas (if you don't understand the term, look up the book and understand that it's now simply used as a term for sexually precocious adolescence or children). Ed and Al are incestuous and very protective of one and other regardless of whether you decide for the actual sex-act of their relationship to manifest during the present-story or pre-story. Roy meets Edward at some point, falls for his charms and his exciting life, then later also meets his brother and becomes whirl-winded into a life of two young lovers who seemingly will always favour each other more than they him. Lust, envy, games and deceit ensue. Much explicitness (sex, violence, language and all around content). Dub-con, non-con, mind games, twin-kink practically, daddy-play turned around into torment daddy, DOM/lesserdom/sub, blood-play? Possible minor character death (perhaps parent killed by child?)
Read or read about Lolita, listen to Lana Del Reys' Lolita and Put Me in a Movie, watch The Dreamers with Micheal Pitt and a Spanish film called Threesome. That should help you write this. However you plan to make these three characters meet is up to you just know that throughout this those 2 brothers will always choose each other."
| Gry17 chapter 8 . 8/13/2013
Did Naraku tease Inuyasha, just to get his attention?
| Emma chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I really wish people wouldn't put "no incest" in descriptions so they appear when somebody IS searching for incest. Typing that is like typing "no cannibalism" we kinda assume there won't be any already.
| Laurenswolf chapter 22 . 7/11/2013
Over all I thought it was a great story but there wasn't a lot of it,it was slightly irritating that your comments where longer than the chapters, but still, lokking forward to the sequel.
| cutepuppy21 chapter 22 . 6/29/2013
Love all of it
| loveinuyashatoshiro chapter 22 . 4/16/2013
it's really great
| Sakata-Bluemoon chapter 22 . 2/28/2013
This was an intriguing read.
I should probably be doing my own work, but this was a good break from it.
You've done and excellent job, I applaud you.
| TheMysticalQ chapter 22 . 2/23/2013
The claws always were something I wondered about... How did that work?
| ladytokyo chapter 22 . 2/22/2013
Wait that can't be it I refuse for that to be it! Please don't let that be it please sniff! ok ok ok if you want that to be it's fine with me love it anyways. How dare you end it so soon it just can't be it NOOOO!
| wolf2012 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
love it so far:)
| XxpandaxloverxX chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Omg I LOVE it!
| Mrs.IanSomerhadlerJacobBlack chapter 21 . 1/6/2013
Awe fabs update (:
| revan225 chapter 21 . 1/5/2013
I can't wait until the sequel! I hope its up soon, this was a fantastic story.
| No-One-Important666 chapter 21 . 1/5/2013
omg! i loved your story and ur OCs ;) and ur lemon wasnt that bad either cant w ait for the sequel XD
| yukinome23 chapter 21 . 1/3/2013
happy new year! nice lemon btw!