|Reviews for Someone|
| dragonbreath88 chapter 1 . 1/8
You should do another one and this time a full story. It was really good.
| Crawling Elf a.k.a. ZIM chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
Yep, I vote for another chapter, svu/tmnt never crossed my mind before but you are doing a great job.
Thanks for sharing and please keep writing.
| Ellmarr chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
| RozenMaiden7 chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
i love it.
| Silverwing15 chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
please continue this i love it!
| dreameralways chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
This is really cool. Olivia is so much cooler than April could ever hope to be anyway.
| Zombie Flea chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
I love this (:
And I'd definetly recomment a series :D
I'm sure you'd make it awesome! Well I'll keep a lookout!
| Soului chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I'm glad to see some more quality Tmnt crossover action happening. Thank you for this.
Actually, I think the lack of dialogue actually worked for this style of fic. After all, it's supposed so be essentially an internal monologue from Olivia's POV.
The only thing I would say is that some of the paragraphs got a little long, which messed with the flow a little. It's one major danger of writing in this style because there is no dialogue to break things up. The real challenge for the author is making paragraphs short enough that it's easy for reader's eyes to follow without having the story end up choppy or disjointed.
Other than that fairly minor detail, well done. The outsider POV to TMNT was fun to read and the mechanics of the story were sophisticated and well written.
Hope to see more from you. Keep it up!