|Reviews for Winds of Change|
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 3 . 5/21/2014
YYYAAAA! I really love this, but why is Shader living in the slums? *shakes head to erase an image of the Midgar slums. I thought all high-ranking demons have a human form, so isn't Shader supposed to be high-ranking too?
Well it's nice to see that she has 2 friends immediately and now Viede will come too.
For Genai and Rizelle, I think you could do that those two know each other already, since Genai has an obvious crush on the girl. Childhood friends or something, poor guy has a one-sided crush though. They could be in one of the other classes, Rizelle noticed the twins once walking outside and playing, so she got curious also a cute child crush on Aion or something?
I hope this will help you :D
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 5/21/2014
I'm disliking those old bags more and more.
I'm starting to feel more pity for Chrono and Aion, those cute kids didn't do anything wrong. They're just being cute and adorable like normal boys their age, thought boys their age can be annoying and restless, thank god I'm too old for that XD.
Yaay Shader appeared! Well she seems to be the closest to the twins compared to Viede, Gennai and Rizelle.
I always wanted Moriyama to write about Chrono and Aion's past. To see a different side form the demon society.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Nice finally a story about Chrono and Aion's childhood. I do feel sorry for them, especially their biological father is probably crushed from sadness, his pregnant wife disappeared and he's suddenly all alone. While poor Chrono and Aion are immediately sentenced to death. Those two poor kids didn't do anything wrong, they were only born.
Well we all know those two will survive anyway. yaaay!
Stupid shitty bastard demon elders.
When you think about it, only the elders are the criminals, all the other demons weren't even aware of it all.
| scape chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
I'm very interested in where this story is going. I hope you keep it up. Small critique, but as a suggestion, try adding some more detail in the scenes and some more character development. It feels like the story's rushed, almost like cliff notes.
Anyway, good luck!
| mr grimjaw chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
this so great keep up the good work
| mr grimjaw chapter 2 . 8/16/2012
this is very good. you should read my two fics i wrote. the secret weapons and saveing sakura
| mr grimjaw chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
this a good fic so fr it feel like a episode from the anime