Reviews for Demons'll Charm You
madnessofsilence chapter 25 . 7/24/2013
...I, I really like officer Averill.
I have this lingering feeling that he's gonna die though...
Because Toby is going to think...Well, what with he and Belle not being so close at the moment.
It just doesn't look good.
On another note, the ending of this chapter was incredible, and creepy, and...Sweeney somehow sent a letter from hell. Or, you know, just as a ghost.
Thank you for this.
- Jen
Thoughtless Beauty chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
I love the beginning of this! I always wondered what happened to Toby after Sweeny and Mrs. Lovett died, keep up the amazing work. Honestly its so compelling!
LovelyFandomLover chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Seriously this is an AMAZING story. Have so many compliments to say but wont have enough space. This story its just perfect. I love how you make Toby. Really great.
madnessofsilence chapter 23 . 6/21/2013
Ah, that was just a horrifying chapter full of pain and guilt and terror.
Written incredibly well as usual. And I walked away just as the dream started to wake up my brother. And said this
"You're going to dream of Todd until you are knee deep in blood..."
And then I went back, and finished the dream, and realized how accurate what I'd said was.
And as soon as the Doctor came out.
Toby's joy it was just...Crushing. Because you know when you're reading, but he doesn't. He can't see it.
And then...You know he's going to blame himself. You know. I know.
Toby I'm so sorry. But...
I can't. I have nothing more to say. I'm actually trying not to cry right now. Even though I'd guessed this was coming. A few chapters ago. And then, with the... Oh Tobias. You poor poor thing.
And Belle, just, I want to hug her. Because Toby will blame himself, and Belle will tell him not to. But she'll be thinking in her head that it's his fault too. Because of what he did.
So much sad...
Going to go and drown in feelings now.
You are amazing. And, incredibly dark. But amazing.
FitzwilliamDarcysMistress chapter 23 . 6/20/2013
Oh my goodness, that was so sad! But I loved it. I loved how this chapter was so emotionally compelling through the use of just a few words. I felt in an instant all of Toby's fears and sorrow. Absolutely wonderful! :)
madnessofsilence chapter 22 . 6/9/2013
Well...You officially have me terrified for the next chapter.
Because I want so much for the baby to be alright.
And yet I'm sitting here thinking two things.
Or some Dean Koontz 'Funhouse' thing.
Which is possibly worse.
That baby had claws.
And it was creepy.
Though the rational part of me knows that really isn't where you're going with this story.
Amazing chapter.
madnessofsilence chapter 21 . 4/27/2013
Well you've successfully dragged me from Toby-You-Idiot to pretty much crying.
I'm so sad for them right now.
Both of them.
The Horror Toby had to have felt when he realized what happened.
Dear god...
madnessofsilence chapter 20 . 4/27/2013
Listen for two seconds okay?
Can you not make an exception?
He'd pay double, Belle was home, she saw him for god's sake! Let the man live!
But no...
You are just completely entombed in this trap.
What are you going to tell Belle? Hmm?
At least Todd had a reason...Sort of...
Okay, that isn't quite a valid point.
But seriously...
On a non yelling at Toby note.
You are amazing.
I still can't get over how well you write this.
I am drowning in the awesome.
I still feel so bad for Madeline and mini Phillip. And Belle for that matter.
This isn't good.
This is really not good.
But in a good way XD If that makes sense.
Lovely/Horrid chapter anyways.
Until next time
- JM
madnessofsilence chapter 18 . 4/6/2013
*Restraining urge to go on a 'Toby you idiot' rant*
On a non Toby-you-idiot note.
It's so cute that he sane that to her *-*
And poor Belle. I'm so worried now. I feel like you're going to make all of this very symbolic and then happen very close to her dream. Which will make for good reading, and is rather what I would expect. And yet you do surprise me, which is good. I can't remember the last time I came across a story this good. That could stand by itself. Good lord I want there to be a sequel, and I want this to be it. That is how much I love this.
Anyway, back to Toby-you-idiot.
That is not a good thing. Revenge is not a good thing. You can't keep doing this, to yourself, to Belle, to Madeline, and for the love of God Tobias Ragg YOU HAVE EATEN THOSE PIES! You KNOW the horror that comes with them. How could you be so daft that you actually think this can be good? Are you just losing your mind completely?
I'm sorry, I'm so so sorry.
But you've gone too far.
In spite of all your care.
You will lose all you've worked for.
All you love.
Revenge is a horrid path.
And I advise you stay away.
madnessofsilence chapter 17 . 4/2/2013
I'm crying for you Tobias...I'm crying for you.
This was an amazing and somewhat disturbing, yet also very happy chapter.
I'm astounded the emotions you can invoke here.
You're amazing.
madnessofsilence chapter 16 . 3/11/2013
Dear Mr. Ragg,
I regret to inform you that you have turned into Sweeney Todd. This process is irreversible and you should now be fearing for the life of your loving wife and unborn child. And do not under any circumstances do what I think you are about to do because that would just send you even further down the road.
Truly hoping you get well.
- Jenni

Amazing chapter. Amazing. Really rather disturbing on Toby's part. But amazing nonetheless.
madnessofsilence chapter 15 . 3/10/2013

Rule number one of if you don't want to become Sweeney Todd - Don't innocent kill people.
Rule number two - Don't live in a pie emporium.
Three - Do not under any circumstances, become a barber.

Toby...You are going to be right about that not perfect thing. As excited as I am for the baby and Belle and you and family and how sweet it might sound...I'm really really sorry but that is not going to work out that way I feel. At least not for a while.

I'm starting to try and figure if this story will have a happy ending or not, or if it will just end with Belle dying and Toby getting killed by their child and the loop of Sweeney Todd horrors just never end and the fleet street pie/barber shop mix just repeats and repeats and repeats.

Huh...I went a bit too far into that didn't I?

Oh well. Great chapter.

Thank you for giving this amazing story to the world to be read.

- JM
madnessofsilence chapter 14 . 3/4/2013
That scared me.
That was amazing and terrifying and, incredibly well written.
I feel so bad for Toby...
And Madeline, and Belle, and, oh heck, I feel bad for everyone ever involved in anything closely or even slightly related to Sweeney and Nellie...Just because...It's such a dark place, and I don't want Toby to get stuck there...
But it will be good to read.
Thank you for being such an amazing author.
madnessofsilence chapter 13 . 2/23/2013
Oh, crap...And so it begins.
I'm sorry Toby, I'm so so sorry...
But this is not good, and if you can't manage to hide it...If anyone else ever sees this happen? You'll get chucked back in the madhouse faster than you can say pie.
And as for the child thing...It would be nice, but I would probably be a little...Worried...For that child's mental health. As Johanna inherited some of her own father's madness. And you certainly have enough to spare.
Zelda2h2 chapter 12 . 2/13/2013
I don't understand why this has so few reviews... But I love it. The slow descent into madness is great- I can almost hear Lovette singing creepily too...
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