|Reviews for Pear Shaped|
| WhiteFang001 chapter 5 . 7/29/2013
Wow - great start to a great fanfiction idea!
I love the way that your plot is turning out and evolving
Please write more and update soon!
| HP-DG-SB-HA-RR-KB-NT-TD-LL-AJ chapter 5 . 7/19/2013
Oh this is worth following its just too bad you haven't updated it in a few months. I hope you'll come back to it soon.
| AiSard chapter 5 . 7/1/2013
This fic is really starting to grow on me now :) theres a lot of overtones of.. ah, how should I put it, like everyone knows so-and-so is incompetent and everyone goes on and on about it with the express confidence that everyone else agrees with them. Which they do. But the reader is distinctly outside of this circle of knowledge so gets a tad bit alienated. The consistent trashtalking of the magical USA (can't recall the acronym) atleast the civilian, political heads was an early example. I'm not from an army family, not from America, if there is a section of the population where you can straight out say stuff like that without checking the waters first then I am completely outside of those loops. It might make some sense within the context of fic, seeing as its become something of an international muckup, but you'd still expect some testing of the waters or atleast quite a bit of setting to put it beyond doubt how utterly incompetent they are from a non-biased faction or something. Its happening again with Stark, though here its quite easy to see where everything is coming from as we can extrapolate from the movieverse (which we couldn't for the magical USA govt acronym thing) still, hope he doesn't get the idiot-ball for too long. I really do like how you've handled the whole Thor Odinson thing though, quite refreshing as I don't see it happening so often. And Luna. Luna. Looking forward to Luna :P
| Shisa3 chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
I love that Luna's in this! Can't wait for the nxt chapter. Happy writing! :)
| beulah2013 chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
so good! hope it's not on a permanent Hiatus (read: abandoned)!
| Mistress Saturn1 chapter 5 . 5/6/2013
lol I can just imagine that kind of family run army coming down on Fury's base to help. I can't wait to see what you do with this next.
| Regin chapter 5 . 5/5/2013
I Love, I Like, I Lust!Please Update Soon!
| Lapsis angelus Jullienne chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
I have been hunting for a fanfic
Something that doesn't make me tic
A Harry Potter crossover was I was needing
It is the food for my feeding
So when I find something so very worth it
I get so disappointed and throw a fit
When after a long period of time
Updation is compared to a dime
Its been past 4 months
And I look forward to my hunt
We are waiting
I am waiting
For your story keeps us breathing
When unupdated we are seething
So we apologize for the rudeness
And we've no desire to create a mess
Only simply read the rest
Is what we want best
It is utterly interesting
Your story's plot fitting
So please we beg
Even offer a leg
But please update
Before it is too late !
| Tempest S chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
'Harry smiled at him and Thor studied it before following the women and the wizard aboard.' Was Thor studying his smile? Cause that just sounds rather weird.
| Tempest S chapter 3 . 4/11/2013
'"You've got a kid?" Steve said after a few moments of helping the younger man unpack. "You're, uh, rather young. You look about my age."' And just how old are you, Steve? Remember you've been frozen for decades.
| I'm secrectly annoyed with you chapter 5 . 4/7/2013
YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGING! This story is amazing and really well written. Update soon please!
| purple sky always chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
Hmm, so Luna is a seer... That might be interesting.
| The Third Biker Scholar chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
can't wait to read more!
| Monki-Neko chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
love, love, LOVE that last line!
| Pirate Queen ofthe 21st centry chapter 5 . 2/24/2013
Love it! please update soon! :D