Reviews for Sonic and SEGA AllStars Racing:Alex Kidd's Story 2
Drake Kylocke chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Hello there, I would like to criticize something about your fic.

When a person speaks, after it, start a new paragraph.

The golden rule in speaking: One speaker per paragraph.

Nothing else to criticize. Your story is great overall.

Good luck in the future. If you have any questions or whatnot. don't be afraid to PM me.

Drake Saegsopon
Moderator of Pen to Paper
World Gaming Novelist chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Guest,

The reason I don't update that often is because I am a very busy person working on other things as well. Please be thankful that I'm going to finish this story AT ALL.

Thank You.

-World Gaming Novelist
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Do more, and why don't you update that often?
Choco chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
Hurry up with the next chapter! I need to know what happens in the end!
Choco chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Dude, what's up with the story!? Beat may be a rudie but he is not a murderer or a rapist! Same goes for Ryo, he is innocent! And how dare you make Sonic kill Billy Hatcher! Finish the story with a good ending for all the games or else I'll report abuse.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/9/2012
Princess Lora is not Alex Kidd's girfriend,she is Prince Egle's girlfriend. Stella is Alex Kidd's girlfriend :\
Guest chapter 3 . 8/24/2012
Nice story, but fix the title of your story and maybe check in the middle of Chapter 2 and 3 for proper grammar. Anyways, KEEP GOIN' :()