Reviews for A Second Journey
Monster King chapter 8 . 7/26
Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it because it was getting good.
wweTheBeast2015 chapter 8 . 7/24
Incredible please update this story in 2017 of this July or August and love to see what happens next and hear from you as well and take care and until next future chapter my friend?
wweTheBeast2015 chapter 7 . 7/24
Yes add kazahana to naruto harem sekirei group as well?
wweTheBeast2015 chapter 6 . 7/24
Wow
wweTheBeast2015 chapter 5 . 7/24
Sweet and funny and with naruto showing his powers and getting caught by miya and his group and funny how ends this chapter as well.
wweTheBeast2015 chapter 4 . 7/24
Amazing and naruto save those girls and not have them in his harem sekirei group as well with the other two as well with Akitsu and musubi as well and hopefully wing miya and Yume and matsu too and karasuba?
wweTheBeast2015 chapter 3 . 7/24
Love the thrilling between miya and naruto bit and she perfect to be naruto sekirei too and she can keep in line better and love the chapter too?
wweTheBeast2015 chapter 2 . 7/24
epic
wweTheBeast2015 chapter 1 . 7/24
great start here my friend
Primus2021 chapter 3 . 7/23
had an idea in my head well 2 really.

1. Miya does the Hannya mask thing while lecturing Naruto, then Naruto summons a Ghostly, full body, 9 foot tall Hannya (Rurouni Kenshin) and then tells Miya that her training the Hannya [Dark] Side is incomplete, and that he can finish what his former and now late Apprentice had failed to do, Create a Full bodied Hannya.

2. Miya does the Hannya mask thing while lecturing Naruto, then Naruto flips her on her back, vanishes her clothes and 'lectures' (without words but still using his mouth) her about Lewd, lecherous Acts that ARE Permitted at the Izumo Inn. lol.
socmanco chapter 8 . 7/20
I really liked it! Any chance you could continue it?
Guest chapter 8 . 7/16
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Blake2020 chapter 8 . 6/16
Finally caught up and please updated this story of this summer in 2017 of June or july as well and eager for the next chapter then?
Blake2020 chapter 7 . 6/16
Sweet i like to miya wing and karasuba as well wing and love the chapter as well
Blake2020 chapter 6 . 6/16
Very exciting and i like to see musubi and miya and karasubi as well to naruto harem
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