um how about using a gun harry go American on his ass

im kinda afraid of what he will do if he is in the tri wizarding tournament

This has become far too stupid for me.

So, if you attack someone, you owe them a life-debt? And life-debts are apparently incredibly powerful? If you then continue the attack... what? Shouldn't that... like... instantly kill you for violating that life-debt? Or take your magic, which would then kill you?
Why the f*ck would anyone then ever attack anybody? Even if there's no immediate feedback from the life-debt, there's still a very good chance of any attack resulting in lifelong consequences.
Nobody would attack anybody. Ever.
You'll have to admit: That idea of yours is completely bonkers.

A healer gets executed just for having been someone's only known healer for a given time period, when the crime in question may have happened during a different time period, when there could have been other healers who are unknown because of obliviation or whatever and, most importantly, when there's no reason that the crime must have had anything to do with a healer in the first place?
And, no, this can not have been because as his healer "she had to have noticed something" or thereabouts. No. She was his healer for a year and genuinely didn't notice anything. She probably had a patient file where she documented all she did. That could have easily been used to prove that there was nothing she did that should have led to her noticing anything.
Most importantly: That execution, especially without any evidence, would lead to just about every healer in the country instantly finding themselves new jobs - or leaving the country. Because why take that kind of risk?
Do you seriously believe the Wizengamot would not realize that? Do you believe they want to get rid of all healers in the country?
No, you just didn't bother to think, did you? Just have another thing happen to make the establishment look like assholes. Why bother making it look believeable? Why give a damn that it makes the good guys look like even bigger moron for not being able to easily deal with those establishment idiots?

Lucius can just dissolve his marriage? And keep the dowry? If that can be done so easily, just because the author feels like it and without any special conditions needing to be met, then why the hell would anyone ever marry anyone, if it's apparently meaningless? Why would anyone pay a dowry, if the husband can then just dissolve the marriage and keep the dowry? Don't you realize how moronic that is? The institution of marriage wouldn't exist.

"The first time a wizard was caught cheating his wand was snapped and his hand was broken in several places. If you were caught a second time you ended up as fresh dragon food."
Yeah, right. According to whose laws? Certainly not muggle laws. And goblin laws? Since when are those applicable for wizards doing something in the muggle world? Or is it those ridiculous "security contracts" you mentioned? Well, I guess that means that, according to this contract between me and myself, which you never agreed to or even knew about, and because you looked at me in a funny way I now have the right to take all that you own, crap on your doorstep, set fire to your care, kill your family and rape your pet hamster, all because a contract says so, one that you have never seen, never mind agreed to. Does that sound about right? No? MAYBE THAT'S BECAUSE YOUR IDEA IS COMPLETELY MORONIC. NEITHER WIZARDS NOR MUGGLES WOULD TOLERATE GOBLINS DOING THAT KIND OF THING - CONTRACTS BE DAMNED.
This is the kind of thing that would lead to a war.
But why bother thinking for a moment whether it makes any sense at all? You probably think your readers are too stupid anyway.
IF YOU CAN'T FIND A SENSIBLE EXPLANATION, JUST DON'T EXPLAIN IT AT ALL!

Cho being a bully? Yeah, right. Nothing in canon ever hinted that she could be a bully, but you just go for that moronic fanfiction cliche, because you can't be bothered to come up with something original?

"Harry's father had even donated a large sum of galleons to the cause during the summer before their seventh year. In return Dumbledore made him the Head Boy, despite the fact that he had never been a prefect and was a mediocre student at best"
Do you have some pathological need to make absolutely everyone look as bad as possible, so you can feel a bit better about your own pathetic existence? That's about the only explanation I can come up with for all this bullcrap you make up about almost everyone in this story. This doesn't make Harry look better in comparison. It makes your authoring skills look pathetic.

That "mediocre student at best" was very good at transfiguration, even managed the animagus transformation while still a student (although you cheapened that to a ridiculous extent by simply having some other students repeat that feat as if it were nothing and much quicker too, because why not?), he managed to survive at least three confrontations with Voldemort, when he was barely out of school. Nothing in canon suggests that he was anything but a good student.
And no matter what you seem to ignorantly believe: The Head Boy position is not a reward given to exceptional students. It makes perfect sense to give it to an adequate student who has leadership or other qualities.

"The Goblins disliked scandal"
The goblins don't give a shit about scandals. Why the hell would they? Because wizards have so many alternatives for banking (which Bill never even was involved with)? Bill brings in lots of treasure and that's all they care about.

And even if I could ignore all of that stupidity, there's still the fact that there are essentially no bad guys in this entire story. Anyone who ever acts against Harry probably does so only because of Harry's special magic, thus making them innocent victims of mind-control - thus making this entire story more or less pointless (in addition to being based on some ridiculously stupid ideas).

If you won't bother putting in the effort to make the story look at least somewhat sensible, why the hell should I bother reading this?
Goodbye.

Nice work

must be hard up for cock ah susan typical red head all cunt than brain ah lol

fuck you gay cunt dumbles faggert ah cunty pedo fucker

dumber than dumb faggert twat cunty balls burn in hell

Saying this story is good is like telling a jewellery that raw diamond ore makes for a good weeding ring. It's not. To steal a quote: "Its course and rough". The thing is it does, as a concept, have potential but there are many reasons it can be better.
1: Discussed a few times is the runes sacrifice from the early chapters are made useless almost immediately upon making it to Hogwarts. What with constant second and first degree murder attempts
2: Su Li is a horrible person in the current version and numerous times I almost screamed when Harry just snaps are her instead of exploding and showing the arrogant fucking bitch her place. Should have gotten a slave crest/collar for all the shit she did to make Harry and co lives worse.
3: This Harry is individually weaker than even canon which is impressive given the brief. Where's this special training and magic promised? Honestly the only useful skills he has are the Charisma and broomless flying.
4: The title doesn't even get mentioned for half the story let along explained. Most in the know still believe the Charisma nothing more than the Dumblefuck's mistake with blood wards.
5: Black should have joined Lupin in death. He is as or more guilty than Lupin by virtue of letting Dumblefuck take away his Godson pre-Askaban. In other fics/canon he redeems himself via that fatherlike stance but here he is just a security risk.
There's probably more I missed that I can't bring myself to read a second time to find. Good luck.

Estoy bastante deprimida... me siento mal por Harry

Estoy hirviendo de ira, no se porque demonios sigo leyendo esto.

Because she was the only medic to be involved with him THAT THEY KNEW OF. With no evidence they killed a well known and well liked witch that many generations of kids grew up with?

There would have to be a trial and they couldn't get away with simply offing her with no evidence and instead try and find someone else. Especially since the truth serum would also say she doesn't know.

More forced bs tragedy. Chapter 4 and I'm already sick of thos

This is simply rage inducing. Not exactly good when a reader is supposed to actually enjoy the story. Right now only those twisted bastards who enjoy reading stories with an MC who's tormented in the story would enjoy this so far.

What was the point in this? I thought he was seeking her out for potential help with either his aura or his magic due to her potential lifetime knowledge. Instead he blew it on that little tidbit and likely has Dumbledore angry with him to give him more grief.

He practically got nothing out of that and owes a debt for even contacting her on top of it.

This was idiotic. At least of him. Seriously did he contact her just to find out why the stone was there?

How is it his ability for messing with females minds must be activated but for males its activated 24/7?

When it was altered to need to use runes to activate the effect of his magical aura to be controlled it should obviously mean that males also aren't being affected since its restrained.

So more forced suffering thats needless and doesn't make sense due to the stories own setup.

How is it his ability for messing with females minds must be activated but for males its activated 24/7?

When it was altered to need to use runes to activate the effect of his magical aura to be controlled it should obviously mean that males also aren't being affected since its restrained.

So more forced suffering thats needless and doesn't make sense due to the stories own setup.