Reviews for The Cult of Dionysus
Guest chapter 9 . 3/30
By far the most depressing story I've read on here.
Gryphus chapter 6 . 3/27
You published this some years ago, so I don't expect this to be of much worth. Nevertheless, I'll constructively criticise as much as I can, because you deserve it.

* This is remarkably well-written for a harem fic, particularly in NOT overpowering Harry as too often happens, indeed having his ability hinder as much as help. Thank you.
** Speaking of which, having a good in-story reason for typical fanfic bashing targets (Weasleys, Dumbledore, Snape) is also a plus.

HOWEVER:
* You need a beta, as small typos slip through occasionally such as "welch" instead of Welsh".
** This also applies to small mistakes like having someone "shout" or "explode" or the like without an exclamation mark.
* Hermione is overly emotional, especially as Harry didn't use his ability on her.
* It isn't explained why Harry's super-charisma takes effort to use on women, but men get the anti-charisma all the time with no effort at all.
* A few events at the start aren't given nearly the attention they deserve. Harry being cut open and having runes carved on his bones is over in a paragraph, and Pomfrey being Kissed happens off-screen despite it being, I would think, an important event.
iChaos chapter 28 . 3/25
That was surprisingly entertaining in what I would describe as a biblical sense of the word. As I have gleefully discovered this week, these stories of yours are superlative examples of creative writing in general and fanfiction in particular. The only caveat I can see is that this story could benefit from a thorough editing, but other than that it was great fun to read. Thank you again for posting your work here.
WhiteElfElder chapter 28 . 3/23
Harry finally learned how to use his magic and make it work to defeat enemies.
WhiteElfElder chapter 15 . 3/23
Albus wants Voldemort back so that he can shine up his star some more.
Tarix chapter 28 . 3/6
A truly weird story.
mumlock chapter 28 . 2/19
Great writing, great plot, great delivery.
It doesn't get much better than this.
Thank you very much for the work you've put into this story.
holytoledo760 chapter 28 . 1/31
I admit some parts of this made me cringe with disbelief, but there was always a niggling doubt that it would make sense due to the plot eventually and I think everything did.

You're a good writer, if you ever decide to do a sequel I will read it. Adding you to my alerts. :)
holytoledo760 chapter 1 . 1/31
You are a master with a pen sir, I think I noticed an error in tense once somewhere near the beginning half of the chapter, but all that aside I am deeply impressed with how easily you've captivated me.

The irrationality of the females is explained by the magic that Harry puts out. That made sense.

Thanks for the entertainment. :)
FreelanceBum chapter 28 . 1/6
I...I just can't. This fic was amazingly brilliant, and I loved every minute of it. It also has such a fanfic-like description that I thought it was going to be a horrific pornographic piece of piss.

Bravo, truly a surprising excellent fic.
FreelanceBum chapter 27 . 1/6
Why didn't he stab voldemort with his bloody horn? He is a giant unicorn against a man who was too tired to really move. Just fly up, invisible, and stab.
FreelanceBum chapter 21 . 1/6
Such a squib
FreelanceBum chapter 18 . 1/6
That orgy was one of the funniest things I've ever read in my life.
FreelanceBum chapter 17 . 1/6
Werewolf orgies are the best way to keep the pack together.
FreelanceBum chapter 16 . 1/6
It takes three people to do an unbreakable charm, additionally it isn't blackmail. Its extortion! Silly Draco should know the difference.
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