Reviews for The life in your years
Indyctator chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
This was beautiful! I honesly can't choose which one I prefer, they're all amazing :)
Good job!
Redery chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
This was great!
rand0m-DEATH chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Well, that was... I don't think I can really put into words the feels I have for this one-shot.

To put it simply: it was wonderful, the thoughts well organized, heart touching, and was beautiful. I loved every word in here and if you know the series you'll know who's who in the descriptions. And you used one of my favorite quotes as the basis for this tearjerker of an awesome story.

Bravo ma'am, you wrote a different kind of fic that this site really needs more of. I hope to read more of your well written fics and wish you good luck in writing them.
JadeFlicker chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Brilliant, simply brilliant.

I especially like the bit about Luffy, because it just makes so much sense to me. Truly inspiring piece of work you've done.
HiiroKumo chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
I'm crying. Luffy's part really tugged at my heartstrings. Chopper's as well. Your fic has so much meaning behind it. It's absolutely beautiful.
BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
*applauds*
XXCaptainUsoppXX chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Wow. Love love loved this. I love how you made each part a metaphore using what matters most to them. Franky's and Chopper's were my favourites, I think.
And Luffy's at the end. I love how Luffy, in a way, is the crew's rock, its centre, but really, Luffy needs his crew just as much as they need him.
Beautiful.
Imagination12 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
That was beautiful. The way you went one by one, explaining their lives in paragraphs in reverse. The whole time I read, I knew the end with Luffy was going to be amazing. You definitely didn't let me down.
The last few lines were the most resounding of all, and I couldn't help but take the time to reread them once more to get the full meaning. This story is so good, I can't think of anything to review because it seems generic and plain in retrospect and comparison to what you have written.
In the future, I'll definitely come back to reread this story, how the characters think back on their years of life, and how their dreams are beginning to come true.
Thank you.
i12
Rhirhirhi chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Whoa! That was brilliant!

I loved it, the way you portrayed the characters was excellent. You never mentioned a name, yet each time it was clear who you were talking about. As the reader I was really able to emphasise with the characters and what they had been through - it was really sad at times.

Really a beautiful story!

Well done, that was truly an excellent job.

* Looking forward to the next one shot ;p
thejollyjellyfish chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Simply amazing. You really captured each of them, and the way you made everything flow so smoothly was simply breathtaking. I love it. :)
Tintaglia In Flight chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Oh... my... word...

This was soooo beautiful I currently have tears streaming down my face, literally...
Actually beautiful doesn't even begin to cover it, I don't believe any words in any language could describe the feels I'm happy for this story of yours right now.

As of this moment this is definitely my favourite story of yours and it will be interesting to see if you can top it. I was really touched by how you went backwards in order of when they joined the crew and managed to keep the main theme of 'life in your years' and togetherness throughout while still managing to tie it in with their speciality.

The only thing I will maybe suggest to improve this is to maybe touch up on your tenses here or there and maybe check for missing/extra words otherwise... BRILLIANT!

Continue the awesome writing and I look forward to see whatever you post next! XD
MeltedsnowFlake chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
This is amazing!
Assault Godzilla chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Wow. That was... very emotional & worth reading. It took me a minute to realize which perspectives the paragraphs were written in. Now I understand what each of 'em are about, & who they describe. Very well done, I might add.

Keep it up!
Summer.ice7 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Lovely story; I feel like you've captured the characters very well and while the blocks of text hurt the eyes, they fit the feel of the story.
Great job; another wonderful story you've written. :)