|Reviews for Family Ties (Unfinished)|
| DragonGirl223 chapter 14 . 12/21/2014
I LOVE this story! I hope you decide to keep writing it!
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| DerangedOtakuFangirl chapter 14 . 2/6/2013
poor Trudy too!
| DerangedOtakuFangirl chapter 9 . 2/6/2013
Reminds me of Nico...
| DerangedOtakuFangirl chapter 4 . 2/6/2013
Wow I love this fic
I read it long before i had an account and i've been on google and fanfic for forever trying to find it again!
keep writing! :D
| Juliegirl22 chapter 14 . 12/31/2012
Please update soon! I like this story. I started to guess earlier that Trudy was Nicks half sister.
| Charlotte Fowl chapter 13 . 10/15/2012
I think Trudy is in fact crazy. please let her be crazy...
| Claire chapter 9 . 9/28/2012
Awesome! PLEASE update!
| Insanity chapter 8 . 9/18/2012
A new chapter! What a great early birthday present x3
I don't care to much about grammar xD (which explains why I have such bad grades in English x3) As long as I can understand it...
Well, I should back to my homework
| Insanity chapter 5 . 9/2/2012
Oh God, I'm hooked on this story3
Don't you EVER abandon this, lest I send my little sister to your house to torture you. More please!
| SnowyGhost chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Very cool plot idea but needs to be proof read, a few parts contradicted themselves.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Interesting plot. It's pretty unique, and you don't see much of that... You also have a very direct way of writing. While that isn't necessarily a bad thing, it wouldn't hurt to change the sentence structure a bit.
A few spelling and grammatical errors, but not too bad. Just keep in mind that for dialogue you should use a comma after the character finishes talking, and that you don't have to capitalize the rest of the sentence after the comma.
Ex: "I love reading," said Emma.
Overall, though, good job.