|Reviews for Stay with Me|
| Azalynn137 chapter 17 . 2/8
Ok I'm a little confused in 16 & 17 how did sasuke lie he told naruto what was going to happen. ?
| reevajusia chapter 6 . 1/2
Why you keep calling Kyuubi as Karuma when his name is Kurama?
| yuki chapter 32 . 12/30/2013
yay! congratulation Naruto! this was awome I loved it and make more where they have there kid with them
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
Truthfully, up until now, I still see Sasuke's defection as petty and childish. As I see it, he just couldn't take that Naruto had caught up to him so easily and that Naruto had defeated someone he had failed to win against and was even able to hold his own against him. It was just jealousy, plain and simple. He couldn't take a challenge, his pride wouldn't allow him that. He is just so easy to manipulate. First there was Orochimaru, then Obito, and let's not forget Itachi who practically played with Sasuke's life. Some say it was Itachi's fault that Sasuke became messed up, I don't think so. Sasuke had a choice and he did not choose well. If there's anyone who's really deserving to be messed up, lash out at everyone, and be the Prince of the Netherworld, I think it should be Naruto. And if he ever does, I'd be the first one cheering him on.
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/18/2013
There should be a distinction between words spoken out loud and words just being mere thoughts, preferably thoughts being written in Italics while those spoken out loud just written normally. That would do, most of the fiction's I read distinguishes them apart like that. That had been a problem while I was reading, it confused the hell out of me, I had to read some parts again. And oh! Make Naruto hate Sasuke. It would be better. For me, that is. -snickers-
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
Hey! Make Naruto turn into the Prince of Darkness already. I always find that so cool. Anyway, your Naruto is so conflicting. He seems to have serious inferiority issues yet he dominates a demon, Kyuubi at that nonetheless. As far as I know, the Nine-Tails would bow to no one because humans are puny and weak or so he says. What's with that? And Sasuke's far too affectionate for my taste. He's supposed to be an all-around bastard. Well, well. Who cares? As long as it's yaoi, it's all good. :D
| thelastunicorn chapter 32 . 11/1/2013
i love this story. it is really good.
| iloveYaoi1 chapter 23 . 8/20/2013
you confused me with this sentence:
"Follow me," Naruto said as he grabbed Naruto's hand and dragged him towards the forest.
isn't it suppose to be:
"Follow me," Sasuke said as he grabbed Naruto's hand and dragged him towards the forest.
| Sharingan85 chapter 5 . 8/3/2013
| Yuki-kyo-kira chapter 32 . 7/11/2013
No more? Awe! I think you should write a sequel!
| SolitaryLightning chapter 32 . 5/20/2013
Aww... Ended already? .
I thought I get to see little Naru/Sasu's running around at least. T_T Thanks for the story anyway. If you ever write an epilogue with their kids PLEASE PM me. THANKS!
Great story even though there were some things that can be corrected but overall it's quite good. Will read your other stories.
| SolitaryLightning chapter 16 . 5/19/2013
O_O Naru is so angry inside. O_O Hmm... If Naru ever get to kill Sasu... Or maybe even just hurt Sasu physically or emotionally? Will he live to regret it? It's a question Naru should ask himself. Naru sounds too angry. .
| SolitaryLightning chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
Gah! A "friends" status instead of "lovers" status is frustrating. And the part where they actually love each other and knew it made it even more frustrating... No, I'm not complaining. . Just saying. No worries, I'm still here.
| SolitaryLightning chapter 7 . 5/19/2013
_ So cute! Karuma chibi version. Aww... *hugs*
| SolitaryLightning chapter 6 . 5/19/2013
Shouting in anger and blurting out without thinking is the best way to confess, well, at least that's what I think. To me, it's an honest confession. It's so obvious that Sasu didn't plan to confess but it just happen because the outburst made him say what he really feels. Wished someone would do that to me. It's okay if they person actually shouted in anger to get the message across. O.O
Now, I would wanna see them talk! Talk, Sasu, Naru!