Reviews for He Who Protects the Living
Death Lantern chapter 1 . 3/12
What is the point in having huge prana, ifhe can't use when needed? There's no originality in your writing.
Rawrking chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
Ichigo is Shirou? Absurdity and complete trash
Calen chapter 11 . 1/9/2014
No no nooo! Just as it was getting good. Reaf your rewrite first. I like this version better so please continue this one.
Uldin chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
woah so much happens in the first chapter .
Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 11 . 10/25/2013
oh why?
coronadomontes chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
gracias por el abiso
kyugan chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Oh dear...Aizen's gotta be shitting bricks if he's watching this.
ForestS153 chapter 10 . 9/24/2013
SHIT, this is good. Hurry up to the rewrite plz
OoOXylionOoO chapter 4 . 9/9/2013
Huhu and the hollow is here !
OoOXylionOoO chapter 2 . 9/9/2013
Awesome !
OoOXylionOoO chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Wow this chapter was good.
Determined-OverLord Wang-Yu chapter 10 . 6/30/2013
MUST CONTINUE THIS! NOW I WONDER HOW WILL SAKURA AND RIDER REACT TO HOLLOW-SHIROU AND SABER ALTER?!

GOOD LUCK!
haseo2124 chapter 10 . 5/20/2013
please update soon
Guest chapter 10 . 5/18/2013
FUCK! Awesome evil Shirou/Icigo in full Hollow dragon mode teamed up with Saber Alter!? lol fantastic. I am sorry but both Archer and Rin are surely fucked.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/15/2013
I will say it only. ONCE. No matter what oc or crossover you do so long as you put a child in that situation in the great fire this story will always fail.

It isn't like ichigo seeing his mom dead body. In the fire he saw not only his mom dead but others, men women children as well. Even worse he saw them DYING cursing the world begging to be save STIL believing they would live.

For you to have ICHIGO so normal is WRONG. The least you could have done was to make the inhuman characters of bleach as strong as the deity of naruverse. But NOOOOO YOU EVEN FUCKED THAT UP AND FYI ICHIGO IS FUCKING HUMAN WHICH IS WHY HIS FINAL FORM SURPASSED AIZEN BECAUSE UNLIKE MOST SPECIES WE MAMMALS HAVE CONTINUED TO EVOLVE.
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