Reviews for What It Could Have Been
koichii chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
This is a really good fic! I like the plot though I had an alternate ending in my mind where the two lived happily ever after. Oh well. That's just me. XD

A really bittersweet story. It made my heart ache.

-koichii
Danny-Lynn chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
That was a nice little story. Do keep up the good work.
azab chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
i loved it a lot but what is link to your bolgs?
give them to me
Lucifer98 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
This is so sad ;( I wish they could have met again Dx Nice story 3
27CansOfTuna chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Omg please continue this one. The writong is good and not hard to follow but the plot and character interaction was wonderful and actually seemed well thought out. That part when natsu woke up and was like wait was perfect, this was a good start, cany wait for more.
Indh13 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
*pout* you're mean to Gray. I pity him so badly here... ,(
LoL, just kidding, okay? '
Anyway, I love it! Actually I can't really tell if it's a yaoi but a thick-friendship story like this is good too. And again, I love it!
I'm glad to find that there's another uke-Gray supporter I'll see your other story after this
Hmm... would you write a sequel of this? just asking, out of curiousity
AUehara chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
My, my, isn't this one a sad piece? Poor boys! And still it is really beautiful! I loved reading this, and hell! Time-travelling? That is a hard thing to deal with xP

.Atsuko Uehara
Angelamaterasu chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Sad! Please please please you must continue! T_T
Bloody Queen Mary chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Oh my gosh, that was so sad! I swear, if I ever come across that connivng little bïtch... But I really loved the story overall. Good job! ;)
I just hope Gray and Natsu will meet again someday...
Fullbusterrulesmyheart chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
OMG! I thought it was almost impossible to ever get a story from you! I love your stories! They're awesome!
And just like the others, this one was also amazing!
Ah, those evil bitches!
I hate them for breaking our heroes apart. But will Natsu here remember everything?
Because I can imagine every kind of scenes right now... T-M!
Yeah, K doesn't come in my mind much! Lol!
Hope to see the next update soon! :D
Would we waiting for your work! .
Later