Reviews for When the Moon Fell in Love with the Sun
turntoPaige394 chapter 14 . 9/13
This is... stunning. I don't even know if that word properly describes this story. You are so, so talented and your writing is absolutely beautiful. I sincerely hope you continue with this story because I am DYING for the chapter when Katniss realizes that Peeta is actually in love with her. I am also very intrigued to learn more about the Capitol's role in all of this. (I know it is hypocritical of me, as I myself take 6 months or more to post my next chapter) but I hope you bless us with another chapter soon!
Leila Secret-Smith chapter 2 . 9/9
I haven't read the Hunger Games books in a while, but I remember listening to the audiobook, and let me tell you, your writing perfectly meshes with Suzanne Collins's. I can hear the narrator reading your words, and it's utterly perfect. Im only two chapters in, but I am well and truly impressed. Very well done.
smell the dasies chapter 14 . 9/2
I love this story so much! You are such an amazing writer in the way you incorporate incredible details! It's also obvious that you put so much work and research into your writing. Please never stop writing!
Guest chapter 14 . 8/31
goldnhoney chapter 1 . 8/23
I love this story more than words can express. I'm desperately hoping the next chapter will be posted soon! thank you so much
FortunaMajor chapter 14 . 8/22
Just wanted to say that I thought about this story yesterday during the North American Solar Eclipse. Haha.
Dance Elle Dance chapter 14 . 8/19
I am really enjoying this. I haven't read a Hunger Games fanfic in a long time and this is a great return to the fandom for me. Great work!
Girlreptil chapter 14 . 8/9
Love this beautiful fairy tale! I'm waiting on pins and nendless for another chapter!
Guest chapter 14 . 8/8
This is hands down the best fanfic I've read, please update soon!
Ellae chapter 13 . 8/6
Still very much enjoying the luscious food and rich history/story, but this latest "fairy tale" is really pushing the believability of Katniss' obliviousness. It had her mom's name and her exact description, down to clothes. Even without the trolls, there's too much. But perhaps ignorance really is bliss.
Ellae chapter 7 . 8/5
So far your story is just unabashed, glorious food porn. I just had breakfast and I'm starving. A little annoyed that Katniss is still so oblivious, but then again she's about that aware in the books too. We need more sex ed in schools I tell ya. Magnificent.
UnDefineMe chapter 14 . 7/30
omg this chapter was epic. Listen. THIS SLOW BURN IS MURDERING ME. I need more. And more of your writing. Kay thanks.
Sylviecake231 chapter 12 . 7/23
Hi, I meant to review earlier, but I just couldn't seem to pull myself away from this story for even 5 minutes. It's absolutely beautiful! I love the depth you've given it, especially Pollux and Lavinia's stories and that of Ashpen; I love the idea of Katniss having a fierce huntress grandma she takes after. The only problem is, you've made the descriptions of the food Peeta makes so vivid, my mouth has been watering for the past 12 chapters! This is honestly one of the most beautiful stories on this website, I hope you know. I can't wait to read the rest!
fernandfeather chapter 14 . 7/23
Your writing is so sensual. I'm left feeling hungry after each chapter for food and more. Beautiful story, if frustrating, for the denseness and self-sacrificing that Katniss and Peeta habe for eachother.
FortuneFaded2012 chapter 14 . 7/12
It has been a very long time since I have been on this site due to medical issues, life changes, and a host of minor things. In recent months I have returned on days off or odd occasions when I have free time only to read Harry Potter fanfiction and a random Gadge fics here and there. About a week ago I noticed that this story had been updated as I tend to check on it once in the greatest of whiles hoping for even a tiny sliver of the next part of the story. To my surprise there was an enormous chapter and it took me the better portion of a week to read it with all my real-life commitments. This morning I finally finished it in the wee hours of the night when I had trouble sleeping. You have literally and truly outdone yourself this time. I am in love with the poetic ebb and flow of the Peeta/Katniss conversations, the motherly nature of Lavinia, the strong silent presence of Pollux, and the copious amounts of food. You are a marvel, a wonder, a gift to all Hunger Games writers and readers. Thank you for sharing your passion and intense work ethic with us. You have truly given us a very lovely reading experience. I am excited for the next bend in your tale. I hope that the conflicts facing our dear couple will begin to surface and breath a little more action into the story. I do love a fierce Katniss.
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