Reviews for 50 Shades of Growing Up
Guest chapter 103 . 4/18
Good story and you are a amazing writer.
Doris Rebelo chapter 38 . 10/25/2016
I don't understand how come you decided to have Elliot aka "Lelliot" as Christian
had called him when he was little, die. Elliot & Christian together and their
famous phrase "Laters Baby" could melt an iceberg. It would have been nice
for him to be able to be with his whole family for many more years, I just
loved the way he use to call Anastasia " Itty Bitty", I really think that Elliot
in his own way had a lot of admiration and respect for Anna. Those "Grey
Men" have such a way that make one want to fall, hard in love with them.
Doris Rebelo chapter 102 . 10/24/2016
You are such a very good writer, thank you for giving all of us readers
that "More". I could not stop reading this chapter, it had brought tears
and happiness to my heart and that very happy ending with Ethan & Mia
being married and Michael & Phoebe having twins again. That had to
be a wonderful sight with Michael , Sophia, Elliot and Xavier walking
into Phoebe's room and hearing Xavier calling her mommy.
I just could not stop reading these chapters they were the best!
Thank you so much.
Doris Rebe chapter 91 . 10/24/2016
Oh Boy! Andrew is Ava's Doctor! Too close for comfort, Andrew is an amazing
letter writer, is he trying to wear Dr. Grey down, Phoebe has Michael and
the good doctor had better be a good boy and I hope the marriage that
Michael & Phoebe have becomes "More" just like what Christian & Anna
have everyday, every hour, every minute and every second.
Doris Rebelo chapter 75 . 10/23/2016
Maria Amore, OMG how is Phoebe going to deal with this Andrew and poor Michael.
Please keep on writing About can't wait to see what happens next.
Doris Rebelo chapter 72 . 10/23/2016
I'm not getting any housework done, I can't stop reading this chapter,
however, that Andrew does have a way, a very smooth operator just
like the Great Grey that makes you get weak I the knees and melt!

I just have one question? Why did "Lelliot" aka Eliot have to die,
he should have been able to live a lot longer and walk his
daughter down the aisle. Christian's brother, they were
connected at the hip and poor Kate, the love of her life, gone
much to soon!
Doris Rebelo chapter 64 . 10/22/2016
Please, keep on writing, it is so good!
Doris Rebelo chapter 62 . 10/22/2016
You did a great job on writing this chapter, please keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 42 . 7/24/2016
What, Elliot's passing, to young!
manmadebbie chapter 12 . 7/22/2016
Hmmm.. spanking a 16 year old? This is weird. I'm going to try to continue reading, but... spanking a 16 year old?
manmadebbie chapter 13 . 7/22/2016
Hmmm.. spanking a 16 year old? This is weird. I'm going to try to continue reading, but... spanking a 16 year old?
Guest chapter 103 . 6/9/2016
Loved this story xx
Forthe loveofcamelot13 chapter 37 . 10/18/2015
Firstly let me say you had me SO worried that it was Christian! Secondly I have stumbled on your stories 2 days ago and have not been able to leave them alone! No book has done that to me since the Fifty Shades trilogy.
kristylg23 chapter 30 . 10/17/2015
i just wish that chriaian treated phoebe the name as teddy i know is older but when you think about it teddy may of had sex at 16 years old to
sue5088 chapter 103 . 2/15/2015
I just found your story on Fan Fiction and I have read the entire story in two weeks! I loved it! Your writing flowed from one chapter to the next flawlessly. The story line was amazing and creative.
I am so sad to see this story end. I agree with you that to end it when it feels right to you and to stop at a good place in the story is the way to go. I'll be waiting your next story.
Congratulations for a job well done.
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