Reviews for Saving Him
red2013 chapter 20 . 2/26/2013
great story.
Thre3 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Sorry I cbf logging in. Interesting concept :) & good start
jennkyle chapter 20 . 11/24/2012
I just loved this story you must write another one
jennkyle chapter 19 . 11/17/2012
Loved it sad that there is only going to be one more chapter
jennkyle chapter 18 . 11/10/2012
This was a great story loved it thank you
Kate beckett chapter 16 . 10/27/2012
Amazing. But could you make the chapters a bit longer? :)
mercilesslyme94 chapter 5 . 10/23/2012
flow better. Sorry my other review was messed up. My phone likes to play games somtimes. -nicole
mercilesslyme94 chapter 4 . 10/23/2012
Hi. Obviously I'm new to the story since I'm reviewing chapter 4 and not 15, so I don't know if you have possibly started doing this; when you're writing the dialogue for the characters, could you put quotation marks at the end of their sentences? I love the story so far, don't take me asking this as a bad thing. Its just as I'm reading, I'm finding myself a little out of place with the story in my head because I don't see them. In my opinion the quotation marks will help them story flow helphelphh
jennkyle chapter 15 . 10/20/2012
Found today and read it all it was so good
Audrey 1986 chapter 15 . 10/20/2012
very good chapter but that damage does not happen really something. I can not wait to see what will happen next
Guest chapter 14 . 10/13/2012
good idea to have the version of kate and rick from the future and the present.
Lara Knight chapter 12 . 9/28/2012
Awwww cute!
Guest chapter 11 . 9/26/2012
great chapter
Lara Knight chapter 11 . 9/26/2012
Another cliff hanger! The brother, Andrew Smith love it love it love it! Nxt chapter?
Lara Knight chapter 9 . 9/25/2012
Omg I love the cliff hanger, maddox is out! :o I like how you linked in always with this sory and can't wait for next chapter :D Xxoo
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