Reviews for Hidden Truths
Ethereal Forest chapter 5 . 12/31/2014
Really nice fanfic - loved the drama and tension and characters were well done. Thanks for the read!
LexiLevine88 chapter 5 . 12/19/2014
I love it!
Rizaidym chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
You know what I think you can do to seriously up the quality of your writing? Un-bold the dialogue. The quotation marks tell people that your character's are speaking aloud, the bolding merely distracts from the non-dialogue parts, making it had to pull satisfaction from the work. When I'm reading works that bold dialogue, I find my eyes simply skimming from one piece of dialogue to the next, and the effort required to focus on everything else makes the story less satisfying all the more due to the fact that it shouldn't be necessary. Not to say that I'll stop reading, of course! :)
ElementalMiko12 chapter 5 . 3/7/2014
*..* Nao i love it you should totally write more stories; or we could partner up later and do a Joint Fic for Candy Boy if your up for it!

I like how you didn't change them from how they act towards each other in the show and loved all the teasing moments. I have to admit they all made me laugh a little. Especially when Kana teased Yuki with sweets!

My only problems with this is that honestly i want more chapters to read and the few small grammar mistakes. I wouldn't worry about it too much though considering i'm sure TAS has plenty of its own even with us doing multiple checks. XD I know my stories have plenty of those issues too; hate's grammar checking :P

And your totally and completely right! You are totally evil to your readers; still can believe you left out the shower bit Y.Y so mean. And right now i know your thinking OMG Lynnette wrote me a mini story for a review! Am I wrong? 3 I'm not aren't I that's totally what your thinking. Haha holy crap what irony I get nearly done and you write you have a feeling its going to be an essay on Skype.

anyways back to the review! I like all the detail you put into; it wasn't an extravagant amount, but enough to where an awesome story was born. :3 Absolutely love the story o.- don't kill me for writing a mini book of a review k
ElementalMiko12 chapter 4 . 3/6/2014
:D aw Yuki what a cute way to go about getting Kana back to normal :3
ElementalMiko12 chapter 3 . 3/6/2014
3 Kana and Yuki are far too cute...
ElementalMiko12 chapter 2 . 3/6/2014
I love it :D but i must sleep v..v so tired, so i shall continue once i wake
ElementalMiko12 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
XD aw that so cute nao
Angel981 chapter 5 . 9/18/2013
Can one die from cuteness?

Cause I think I died from saying "kawaii" too many times...

or at least thinking it
Angel981 chapter 4 . 9/18/2013

Angel981 chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
Oh No! DX Is Kana now feeling sadness from this?!
Angel981 chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
If only I had the romantic wits Yuki did...
Angel981 chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
so cute! kawaii
deeactivated chapter 3 . 8/30/2013
I love Kana’s inner monologue in the beginning. X3 :) I also love how awesomely sweet and fluffy this chapter was! :3 The scenes you write them in are so adorable. I fangirled quite a few times during this chapter! X3 :3 Ah, Kana was doing so good (on the task of accepting her feelings for Yuki) until the end of the chapter! :’O It was very clever of you to have her take a few steps back on her journey at the end of the chapter though. I think that it was a good writing decision. The readers (and definitely this reader!) are even more engaged in the story and hoping for Kana to accept her feelings and be happy again! (The combination of fluff and angst/drama you had in this chapter was perfect. The fluff to show readers how awesome life is for Kana and Yuki when they’re happy, but reminding us that they’re not all the way to happiness yet/they still have more steps to go.) Another thing that I’d like to let you know is: I really love how you write both of the characters, especially Kanade. :) I know that I’ve said that before, but I’ll elaborate: In addition to what I’ve said before, I also like how sensitive Kana is to Yuki as well, like how seeing Yuki happy makes her happy. I think that that’s a really sweet, admirable, and relatable side to Kana. I saw a lot of that in this chapter. :) I look forward to reading more of your work! :3
deeactivated chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
Great chapter! Yuki was so cute. X3 I love how she understands Kana so well. The teasing was also cute. :) I look forward to reading more chapters! :3
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