Reviews for dream of the lotus in bloom
K.a.grier chapter 15 . 12/5/2017
This story is beautiful, it's unclear whether c15 is supposed to be this final chapter there's another coming but it works great anyway.
Fireflyeleven chapter 13 . 10/22/2016
coelacanthis chapter 2 . 6/4/2016
This is beautiful
Guest chapter 15 . 2/20/2016
Good fanfic but I do have to wonder when you will add the final chapter to put and end to this wonderful but sad story.
The Auburn Girl chapter 15 . 2/3/2016
Wow...this story is amazing in it's imagery and development. I'm not sure if there is going to be another chapter, but I hope we see more of Amon/Noatak and his reaction to Korra's actions. Amazing job!
A Gaggle of Geese chapter 6 . 12/21/2015
You have a startling, unique writingstyle and you portray the characters so very well. I really, really love it. It's incredibly entrancing. Thanks for writing such a masterpiece!
Viburnum chapter 15 . 8/20/2015
This is a question I hope you wouldn't be offended if I ask: does Noatak's love for Korra also borderline such twisted form of romance and obsession? It may be just obsession but I just wanted to ask as he is such a messed up individual who made Korra hate herself and did so much abuse to her. I just wanted to know.
galaxian gal chapter 15 . 7/26/2015
This is one of the best stories I've ever read on this sight. It's so good and I'm so excited for the conclusion. This is so beautifully written, every sentence flowed smoothly and was further engaging me in the fic. The story is wonderful. Korra, so misled, but Amon/Noatak given personality and humanity, while remaining a villain. The way her friendship (and some romance with Mako, which was really great too and didn't feel forced in at all) with Bolin, Mako and Asami helped her, helped change her for the better and realize herself was fantastic. And the suspense at times made my heart pound. I love this.
Malgrain chapter 8 . 7/6/2015
Awh. This was kinda cute, seeing the fluffy moment there. It's nice.
Malgrain chapter 7 . 7/6/2015
Another great chapter! I'm reading through this so quickly though! I need to slow down..
Malgrain chapter 5 . 7/6/2015
Really loved this chapter.
moomacow chapter 15 . 7/5/2015
"Rocky performance" made me laugh, among other things, but puns stand out:] You're great at showing the tenderness between Mako and Korra while having a meaningful friendship with Asami and that's just wonderful. Your imagery is astounding, I love your fic and I was resigned to you leaving it unfinished months ago but my hopes have been rekindled!
Malgrain chapter 4 . 7/5/2015
I'm really enjoying this story so far, I really love the idea of the story and it has played out really well so far. Thanks for another great chapter. :3
Malgrain chapter 2 . 7/5/2015
Pretty good! There is a lack of commas/periods at certain points in the chapter that make it a little harder to make out the sentences, but overall it is a minor thing and your writing is pretty good besides that. . The story itself is great so far, by the way. I look forward to reading on!
T.S. Polyphemus chapter 2 . 7/1/2015
Trigger warning...for a slap?
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