Reviews for Shadows of a Moon Ray
AllenMoyashiWalker chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
Can't wait for the next chappy!
Shadow MicNight chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Cool it's got an interesting start I don't know if I'll get into it though, but keep going.
Good luck with it.
Shadow.
MelodyDTK chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
WOW. I can tell you are a VERY talented writer already, and I can't wait to see what happens next, and how he died. Hmmm.. only found ONE error, which is excellent. In the very beginning, you spell "tare" and that is not how you are supposed to spell it. But that's all! Other wise, I LOVED it, and I am amazed at your ability. Wow. Amazing. Update soon, and i can't wait until I find out why Maka is so weak... Huh. This really got me thinking. Thanks! Update ! :)
-Melody
Kiwi chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
oooo, I'm intrigued. The writing is excellent and the descriptions make it seem so real in my mind. Excellent job.