Reviews for Sharks in the Swimming Pool
Guest chapter 11 . 4/3
So, are u ever gonna finish the story? I really wish u would...
Corr5092 chapter 5 . 4/2
update please
MollyE.13 chapter 11 . 3/19
This was the first story I read of yours and I loved it. I still do! I can't wait for the next update and will be eagerly looking forward to it! Thank you!
Darkward Darling chapter 11 . 2/8
Looking forward to more of this story when you have a chance! Cheers!
Sweetie7smiled chapter 11 . 1/11
Neat that they found her so quickly! I bet Bosphorus really helped make the difference; that's such a neat relationship between the dog and Bella. Looking forward to seeing E/B's take on this. Thanks for writing!

P.S. This second story is neat, too! :) Thanks for sharing!
bratangel1 chapter 11 . 1/10
just love this beautiful story so glad your continuing with this story.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/11/2014
Bella is such a baby.
Corr5092 chapter 11 . 12/9/2014
can't wait for more
brownietckmama chapter 11 . 11/28/2014
Love Charlie, love Alice, love Edward, love Bella, love Rosalie's potential - thanks!
Simi Nightmares chapter 11 . 11/28/2014
Thank you for the update! Like the little RA Edward piece. Looking forward to more :-)
imjacksbrokenheart chapter 11 . 11/27/2014
Thank you so much for continuing to post your lovely words. I look forward to reading more of them when they are available. Take care!
crackupmonkey chapter 11 . 11/27/2014
Great to see another chapter.
jansails chapter 11 . 11/27/2014
GLAD TO SEE YOU RETURN!

In Forks:
Bella is trying to be independent of Edward, partly a misunderstanding & partly understanding.
Bella's fighting the feeling of almost suffocation or intrusion as Edward & the rest of the Cullens overwhelm her life, while she also feels a pull, a string tenuously connecting her with Edward.

In college:
Edward is a gentle, caring force, & when it comes to Bella, he's determined.
It's obvious Edward's fondness is growing as he tries to maintain his RA relationship.
The amount of time Edward's spending with Bella & the amount of energy he's expending on seeing her physically & emotionally stronger are more than simple friendship, at least for her.

jansails/jan2
S chapter 11 . 11/27/2014
Soooooo happy to see an update from you! Can't wait for whatever comes next! :)
fallunder chapter 11 . 11/27/2014
Lovely chapters to both stories. TY for updating.
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