Reviews for So I Could be the Snake
littleditto chapter 8 . 5/15
This is really interesting. Awesome dystopian world. (Ha, oxymoron!) But seriously, good job.
sanjiism chapter 8 . 4/19
second time reading this and it still is amazing! thank you for sharing this with us
ScaredyCheshireCat chapter 8 . 2/19
It was an amazing story!
Stray Moss chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
Wow, this is really good! I can't wait to read the next chapter, this is exactly the type of story I've been looking for (and couldn't find for the life of me)! Not TOO much excitement (yet?) and perfect to lay in bed to relax and read. The end makes you want to read until you finish the story, and it makes me feel nostalgic for some reason with a twinge of bittersweet-ness. This story is written very well!
emygrl99 chapter 8 . 10/9/2015
Can I just say I absolutely love how this ended? Cause I did. I'm really glad Ace/Marco didn't die like I thought he would, that would've made me SO SAD. But yeah, this story was amazing and I'm dying for more MarAce moments! Do you have anymore one shots or drabbles about them? n.n I'd read the heck out of them
emygrl99 chapter 7 . 10/7/2015
"When this is all over, I'll show you the stars how they're meant to be see,"
MARCO'S GONNA DIE ISN'T HE? I just know it why would you do that to me TT
That scene with Ace and Whitebeard was just so perfect though, it was amazing feeling how Ace was finally accepted and knew that he finally had a home and a family and is free, this is one of my all-time written scenes, it's so beautifully worded and in-character it must've taken a long time to get it this way, cause all the effort really shows
emygrl99 chapter 6 . 10/6/2015
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH THIS CHAPTER! *deep breaths* AHHHHHHHHHH
xD okay but really, all of the AceMar moments were rlly cute and I love how Ace finally decided to follow his dream (even if that happened a couple chapters ago it's nice to see that he's still holding strong to it) and I love the dinner that happened, cause we got to see Ace just being happy and relaxed and having fun which I will never see enough of even if every writer in the world dedicates their entire life to writing happy Ace. And then Shiki coming after him (no surprise there) and Ace was ready to die but he wasn't and if I didn't know that this was the last chapter I s2g I'd be dead right now. But Marco came to save him! As I knew he would but ahhhh it's just so amazing, this story is amazing and your writing is amazing, and thank you so so much for writing this -
emygrl99 chapter 5 . 10/6/2015
Aww, it's really cute seeing how Marco's feelings for Ace grew over time, and I'm glad that we finally got more on Marco's backstory, I wad SO curious!
emygrl99 chapter 3 . 10/5/2015
I KNEW IT WAS MARCO! Em, M, ahh I'm so glad, and I think it's safe to assume that Marco is the bird, although Ace has no idea. That'll be a bit of a surprise when he figures it out xD
emygrl99 chapter 2 . 10/5/2015
owo I love this anonymous club thing! I'm so happy Ace is starting to find peace with his powers, even if he still doesn't feel confident enough to join Luffy's crew. I'm going to take a wild guess and say T is Thatch. As for M, I thought possibly Lao G and then Marco but now I just don't have any clue at all xD and the bird/Marco's back! I hope he's not hurt too badly, I love him so much n.n
emygrl99 chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
Oh wow, I only sorta suspected it but not really and I'm mad that I didn't guess it xD it's kinda cool how Luffy's an active opponent against the government in comparison to in the series where he just happens to be against the government cause that's where his dream led him. Has he become like the the Revolutionary Army leader or is he an independent group? So many questionsssss, the most important being if that bird is Marco, why didn't he transform into his human form? Cause he'd be naked? :p
Mithril Lace chapter 8 . 7/29/2015
Oh my gosh, that was absolutely amazing, start to finish! I loved it :3 And I especially loved the world building, because that's such an important aspect of the storytelling that gets overlooked really often. I also really, really love when the friendship between Marco and Luffy is there. I couldn't stop smiling.

~Mithril
StarPurpleandBlue chapter 8 . 7/20/2015
Really, this story is marvelous. I had forgotten I was reading this, and only when I went through your fics did I see it and remember I still had to finish it. I was a wonderful read, and now that I think about it, one of the first MarcoAce stories I read that made me love this couple!

Marco and Ace’s relationship was well developed in this, and I love how it grew gradually after Marco was released and they met again. The world in which this happens is also extremely interesting, and it was nice discovering more and more about it with time. I also really liked how you used Shiki as the antagonist here, seeing as that doesn’t happen often.

I could probably blab a lot about many things, about the characterization of other characters you used and their roles, about San Faldo, about the WP, about Marco’s lonely time and more, but I’ll hold myself and simply say it was all great for me and I deeply loved this story. Thank you a lot for writing and finishing this! :D
knightessjg chapter 8 . 3/25/2015
D'awwwwww, so cute!
Smally chapter 8 . 3/13/2015
The first thing I really liked about this fic how you treated the relationship between Luffy and Ace. Because they are brothers and you showed it really great when Luffy hugged Ace tightly in the first chapter that was really emotional and their next interaction in the third chapter! That was so great how they said they can’t sail together and they have skeletons in their past. AHHH I really loved that part! You have written well their relationship with each other and it was soo emotional how much they wanted to be with each other but they couldn’t and wow that was really perfect for me.

Your characters are really loveable. Ace and Marco… yeah I don’t know what to say I loved it how their relationship developed with time and they love each other so much, I’m sorry I can’t even say more they are just perfect together?

When Ace was talking to whitebeard that was really great I loved it how ace cried a bit that was really sweet, I loved that part so much!
Thank you for writing it! This fic one of my favourite marcoace story!
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