|Reviews for The Fleeting and the Forgotten|
| HazeLilyBluera chapter 1 . 7/17
wtf this is a huge coincidence, it's 2016, 1D is on a hiatus and Zayn isn't in the band anymore (though in this story he was only gone for a short while).
but in this story louis wears suspenders, which breaks my heart, because he doesn't anymore :(
| xweirdos onlyx chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
it would help if you broke it up into chapters
great story though
| ForeverUnited93 chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
I LOVED it!
| dragon fier 20 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Ha! They both lost! Lol. Omg I absolutely lived it! I really don't like Seth just because he hurt Louis... But I loved the rest of the story! It was amazing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I loved it and I love your stories in general they are truly amaZing !:):)
| BoyDirectioner chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
This story is absolutely amazing!
I only wish someone could kick Seth's ass hard... xD
| IAmADirectioner chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
GabiWritesJustBecause, you are amazing as hell.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
I LOVED THIS. You should DEFINITELY write more3
| 1D118 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Omg i actually started to cry at one point! I loved this story :-)
| FueledByChocolate chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
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| KageNoNeko chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Please read the guidelines. Real people is not allowed on this website. OneDirectionFanfiction is where this story should be at instead of here where it could get deleted.
| Supremebananamanager chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
That was awesome ... (::) very happy reviewer
| ashleyblack97 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012