Reviews for Naruto Uchiha & the Olympians
Cthul chapter 24 . 4/23
Lots of typos but that’s a nonissue if you’re a semi competent reader. Story feels a little rushed but that’s also fine. Decent plot and execution, all the Primordials and gods giving him blessings is a bit much though. Especially since you don’t really get to see him using it. The sequel is out but it looks abandoned. Hope to see you continue this series but I won’t hold my breath.
Usernamy chapter 4 . 4/8
bibink729 chapter 1 . 12/7/2023
KEVIN DANIELS chapter 1 . 11/26/2023
Toad not frog
unknown chapter 14 . 7/21/2023
ohio. why ohio
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 1 . 4/10/2023
Cringe as fuck setting. Being the great great grandson to Chaos does nothing. Do you people seriously think powers carry over like that. The powers of demigods aren't genetic, they come from the very soul of a demigod. They don't just stack on like that, so being the great grandson of Chaos provides nothing especially because Chaos is a metaphysical entity of pure creation so it can't really have kids, Amaterasu could provide something to you don't get to be both, any power he gets there would be muted at best so really all his power would come from hades so his skill set would be akin to Nico.
kronosthetitanoftime chapter 1 . 4/5/2023
i agree with ravendeath and I hope you update this fic and really just fine tune the grammar and add more chapters
kronosthetitanoftime chapter 1 . 4/5/2023
ImMoku chapter 1 . 2/27/2023
seriously this Naruto Bashed From Konoha trope is soo cringe..

let's use some brain.. why would konoha want to banish their jinchuuriki to outside world so another village can kidnap him? Jinchuuriki is Village's strongest weapon and this trope just broke that rule LMAO
TrunksJae chapter 8 . 1/18/2023
Kyle chapter 23 . 1/14/2023
When will the next book be out
ravendeath0974 chapter 19 . 12/18/2022
other than the grammar the plot is good
KINGShaheed chapter 5 . 11/15/2022
The idea for the story itself is pretty interesting but the grammar makes any attempt to enjoy the story practically impossible.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/31/2022
You’re author, the least you can do is fix your grammar. You really have to excuse for this. There are dozens of applications and websites that fix grammar for FREE. Please, use them.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/26/2022
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