|Reviews for Naruto Uchiha & the Olympians|
| Darkstorm253 chapter 6 . 3/9
really dude? GOOD MOANING NARUTO! What the heck did u do that on pupose? any way good job with this chapter
| Larissa571 chapter 19 . 3/5
| Leez chapter 13 . 3/1
I know that this story was finished a while ago, and that your even already on the sequel so there's really no reason for you to take note of this, however I couldn't help but fell compelled to mention this.
Why the hell is Percy so STUPID? And why the hell does Naruto even put up with all of his crap? From what I've seen in this fic Naruto is not one to take idiots kindly especially when they're the not only not trying to get better but are also completely angst ridden and don't even bother to think about their choices. He would not put up eith an idiot who's stupid by choice especially when they're doing nothing to try and get better and they're constantly the source of problems that he has to deal with.
I just couldn't put help at the VERY LEAST 5 times a chapter "When is Naruto going to slap Percy and make him get his shit together? He's a complete liability who's in the way of Narutos goals why would he put up with that?
That was brought even more to the fold of my mind every time I remembered that we are given essentially no reason at all that Naruto is even friends with Percy and Grover in the first place. We just get a time skip and suddenly Narutos not only at their school but is also best friends with two people out of the thousands that go there for no reason, that's especially highlighted when you then go on to say that he pretty much ignored everyone else other this the two characters who he would later go on to the camp with. We are given no reason for him to get to know them or for him to let them in to his extremely small circle of trusted friends, he just suddenly has even though it seems to be completely against his character. He then goes on to put up with shit after shit curtesy of Percy and his impulsiveness while never once questioning why he ever became friends up with him nor calling Percy out on his behaviour. It seems like a cop-out to me tbh, you decided that you wanted Naruto on the quest and so chose to make him friends with speedy simply because it would be easier, and so that you wouldn't have to write about their early interactions where Naruto would actually have to form an opinion on him.
Don't get me wrong I can see why you did it, it would very likely (and probably did) save you a lot of trouble in the long run, but I'm afraid that I can't help but think over and over again (almost every time Percy opens his mouth tbh), "Why doesn't Naruto persist in being friends with this angst-ridden, impulsive, weak, judgemental and just plain stupid ass? We've been given no reason for it, Naruto just ignores pretty much all of his actions other than to save him and wipe up his messes! Will he ever just slap Percy and tell him to get over himself?".
Damn sorry about the rant, but your Percy is just the right amount of whiny, weak, brash and impulsive to piss me off something fierce :P
I'm still very much enjoying the story font get me wrong, but it seems to me like your Percy is just simply there to cause problems form Naruto to fix and to generally get in the way. And when he's not doing that he's just there for Naruto to have something to do (to move along the plot until Naruto has to fix his messes again. :P
Anyway, this is a fun story otherwise overall. But I'm afraid that I just fel compelled to say my piece and get this off my chest. It's been festering in me since pretty much the second chapter. Hopefully it will be easier to ignore (because I seriously doubt it will stop) now that I've put my opinion out there :P.
Anyway, this has been a great fic so far and I am enjoying it. Im glad to see that it has been continued (in the sequel) and will likely read that too. Keep it up.
| Zeran X chapter 2 . 2/25
Yeah fuck this shit I'm done the story is mostly stolen and your grammar is by far the worst thing I have ever seen I can barely make out words sometimes.
| Zeran X chapter 1 . 2/25
Your grammar is the worst I've ever read in my life, it's like talking to a two year caveman, fix that shit or don't write.
| UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 13 . 2/17
Yep this is another one of those story insert Naruto here do boring shit hear and have Naruto call every one an idiot when he does nothing him self!
| UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 9 . 2/16
That last part right their was over done it like you cooked a stake till it was all chared on the inside three really Narutos related to three two was more than enough gods to be related to plus the story seems really cannon and has become pretty predictable and boring!
| UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 7 . 2/16
God with the amount power Naruto has he sure as hell like to take the boaring way out of a situation!
| Guest chapter 24 . 2/13
awesome fanfic keep it up
| silentdeath2-2 chapter 24 . 2/13
awesome story cant wait to ready the next book
| Jose19 chapter 21 . 2/13
I want to know how in the world did Naruto beat Kronos because this one of the most powerful TItans in history, and Naruto is powerful but he isn't more powerful than Kronos because the is the father of all the Olympians. I also want to see why Naruto wants to have Cronus's Dna inside of him because the Gods may stop him from doing this because Zeus is very paranoid of having such a powerful Demigod challenging his authority.
| Jose19 chapter 5 . 2/11
I wasn't surprised that Naruto saw through Thalia's tree since the Sharingan can sense chakra, and it can show the energies of a living person, and I hope that Naruto pairs up with Thalia in this story.
| Jose19 chapter 4 . 2/11
I want to see how the Olympians Gods deal with Naruto because he isn't nothing like these Demigods because he is powerful and cunning, and Zeus will be very paranoid about him especially.
| Jose19 chapter 3 . 2/11
I know that Naruto's mother was a Uchiha but was Naruto's father Minato in this story because I am happy that he is because he would have turned out like a typical Uchiha who always have a stick up their butt most of the time because Uchiha are not known for helping out their friends the only exception was Itachi but I am sorry I am not a Uchiha fan but at least Naruto is nothing like them in a way.
| Jose19 chapter 1 . 2/11
I had to read this story from the beginning to finally understand it because you can't start on a sequel without fully understanding the beginning but I wonder if Naruto has Uchiha blood in him will he tempted to the dark side because the Uchiha are the one clan from Naruto that I hate the most because they have insufferable arrogance and pride, and caused a great deal of pain and destruction in the Elemental Nations. I want to see for myself if Naruto walks the path of destruction or will he be the Hero of everyone.